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Around the world, a large number of students and professionals leave their home countries to study abroad. The numbers have progressively increased, and the situation has not improved, which is concerning since it demonstrates that their country lacks sophisticated knowledge and education. The loss of skilled human resources would harm the economy causing further problems such as unemployment, social unrest, and poverty. This problem can be explained in a variety of ways. The first of the most serious problems is a lack of available work possibilities. The expanding number of students with educational skills puts a burden on the saturated labor market in developing countries, making job-seeking more challenging than ever. Another factor that has an impact on this is the poor salary

Around the world, a large number of students and professionals leave their home countries to study abroad. The numbers have progressively increased, and the situation has not improved, which is concerning since it demonstrates that their country lacks sophisticated knowledge and education. The loss of skilled human resources would harm the economy causing further problems such as unemployment, social unrest, and poverty. This problem can be explained in a variety of ways. The first of the most serious problems is a lack of available work possibilities. The expanding number of students with educational skills puts a burden on the saturated labor market in developing countries, making job-seeking more challenging than ever. Another factor that has an impact on this is the poor salary G3Ybw

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a large number of
 students and professionals This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :depart
leave
 their home countries to study abroad. The numbers have progressively
 increased, and the situation has not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :ameliorated
improved
, which The verb 'concerning' is a stative verb and sometimes the progressive form is not correct. Try a simple form instead.
is concerning
 since it demonstrates that their country lacks sophisticated knowledge and education. The loss of skilled human resources would harm the economy causing further
 problems such as unemployment, social unrest, and poverty. This problem can be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :interpreted
explained
 in a variety of ways. The first
 of the most serious problems is a lack of available work possibilities. The expanding number of students with educational This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :proficiencies
skills
 puts a burden on the saturated labor market in This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :Third World countrieslow-income countries
developing countries
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salary