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Some societies more and more young people are choosing to live on their on what do you think are the reason for this is it a negative or positive trend give example from your own knowledge

Some societies more and more young people are choosing to live on their on what do you think are the reason for this is it a negative or positive trend give example from your own knowledge L3Mn6
In this modern era where everyone want to succeed in a short time although they make a lot of efforts but due to less work opportunities they do not get so many chances at a particular place where the use to live they think to shift another place where not only they get good working placement but also they can leave their on this and have some negative as well as positive development but I sure negative views out weight the positive ones to begin with of late youth want to become self dependent didn't want to reliable upon anyone because they think they are a burden on their parents so if they leave by their on it also teach them how to survive in a hard circumstances traditionally sometime young people prefer to live at your own zone they did not like to meet with anyone because they want to keep focus regarding their goal basically these days some of them also want some privacy from their parents for instance if you and l want to do something new their parents always make some issue so they do not want any interface regarding their work on the other hand although there are a plethora of causes why young P public want to leave conceal while there are so many negative are also originate by this such as if they leave at their own place where no one can improve them so as a result they become a introvert this make a straight impact on their communication skill and also check the Mentally more ever when children become independent they do not care about their graduation in further another negative view is that also it make their life so stressful where they have to maintain a balance between social and working life in conclusion it is important for youngers to face struggle and make themselves depend pendant but it is also crucial that did not become quitter from these major responsibilities
In this modern era where everyone
The pronoun 'everyone' is usually used with a third-person or a past tense verb: "wants", "wanted".
want
to succeed in a short time although they
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make
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a lot of
efforts
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but
due to less work opportunities they do not
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get
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so
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many
chances at a particular place where the
Make sure that 'use to' is correct. For habitual actions in the past or to mean 'accustomed to', use "used to".
use to
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live
they
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think
to shift another place where not
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only
they
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get
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good
working placement
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but
also
they can
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leave
their on this and have
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some
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negative
as well
as
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positive
development
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but
I sure
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negative
views out weight the
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positive
ones to
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begin
with of late youth
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want
to
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become
self dependent didn't
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want
to reliable upon anyone
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because
they
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think
they are a burden on their parents
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so
if they
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leave
by their on it
also
teach them how to survive in a
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hard
circumstances
traditionally
sometime young
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people
prefer to
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live
at your
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
own
zone they did not like to
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meet
with anyone
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because
they
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want
to
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keep
focus regarding their goal
basically
these days
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some
of them
also
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want
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some
privacy from their parents
for instance
if you and l
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want
to do something new their parents always
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make
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some
issue
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so
they do not
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want
any interface regarding their work
on the other hand
although there are a plethora of causes why young P public
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want
to
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leave
conceal while there are
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so
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many
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negative
are
also
Consider using a past participle here: "originated".
originate
by this such as if they
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leave
at their
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own
place where no one can
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improve
them
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so
as a result
they
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become
Use "an" instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
a
introvert this
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make
a straight impact on their communication
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skill
and
also
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check
the Mentally more ever when children
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become
independent they do not care about their graduation in
further
another
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negative
view is that
also
it
Did you mean "makes"?
make
their life
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so
stressful where they
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have to
maintain a balance between social and working life
in conclusion
it is
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important
for
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youngers
to face struggle and
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make
themselves
The verb 'to depend' requires the preposition '(up)on': "depend on".
depend
pendant
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but
it is
also
crucial that did not
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become
quitter from these major responsibilities
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IELTS essay Some societies more and more young people are choosing to live on their on what do you think are the reason for this is it a negative or positive trend give example from your own knowledge

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  American English
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