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Are you interested in visiting extreme environments

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Visiting extreme environments isn’t attractive for me, because I think they’re frightening. I feel afraid of height. I can’t even climb a small ladder, so such extreme environments like high mountains can’t be exciting for me. Deserts have harsh situations, sparse rainfall, hot weather during the day, extremely cold weather during the night, and sand storms. I don’t like this condition and they aren’t joyful for me. Overall I prefer to be comfortable rather than put myself in a difficult situation.
Visiting extreme environments isn’t attractive for me,
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they’re frightening. I feel afraid of height. I can’t even climb a
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small
ladder,
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such extreme environments like high mountains can’t be exciting for me. Deserts have harsh situations, sparse rainfall, hot weather during the day,
extremely
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cold
weather during the night, and sand storms. I don’t like this
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condition and
they aren’t joyful for me.
Overall
I prefer to be comfortable
rather
than put myself in a difficult situation.

IELTS essay Are you interested in visiting extreme environments

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
81 words
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4.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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