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Are you interested in visiting extreme environments

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Visiting extreme environments isn’t attractive for me, because I think they’re frightening. I feel afraid of height. I can’t even climb a small ladder, so such extreme environments like high mountains can’t be exciting for me. Deserts have harsh situations, sparse rainfall, hot weather during the day, extremely cold weather during the night, and sand storms. I don’t like this condition and they aren’t joyful for me. Overall I prefer to be comfortable rather than put myself in a difficult situation.

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because
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think
 they’re frightening. I feel afraid of height. I can’t even climb a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:tiny
small
 ladder, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 such extreme environments like high mountains can’t be exciting for me. Deserts have harsh situations, sparse rainfall, hot weather during the day, extremely
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :chillyfrosty
cold
 weather during the night, and sand storms. I don’t like this Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).condition, and
condition and
 they aren’t joyful for me. Overall
 I prefer to be comfortable rather
 than put myself in a difficult situation. 