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Are there any natural areas in your country that have been affected by human activity? What can be done to protect such places?

Are there any natural areas in your country that have been affected by human activity? What can be done to protect such places? Wn3lD
The living environment of people today is being destroyed more and more seriously. In Vietnam, currently, there are many areas of natural forest land, plains or sea areas that are being affected by human activities leading to unpredictable consequences. It is one of the most concerned problems we are facing. First, serious deforestation by loggers along with illegal exploitation of forests by people in mountainous areas such as in the Central Highlands and North Central regions. In recent years there has been deforestation for other purposes such as agriculture, construction of roads and buildings. Deforestation poses serious threats to the environment such as destruction of natural habitats and the loss of the earth's lungs. Forest fires have wiped out many green hills on the forest map of our country. Those are the causes leading to floods, landslides, flash floods causing great loss of life and people's property. In order to conserve forests, there should be immediate sanctions or instructions for people by individuals and governments. Second, another problem is environmental pollution. In some areas of large towns and cities, waste, wastewater, exhaust gases, dust and noise have exceeded the permissible limits, causing great harm to human life and health. Garbage and wastewater not only pollute rivers and underground water sources that provide fresh water for humans, but also destroy the environment of arable land. Nature's creator has given us many precious things, but we have been gradually destroying those valuable things. Therefore, each individual and community need to be conscious of preserving and protecting the environment such as not throwing garbage on the street, gathering garbage in the right place, treating waste, planting trees to cause forests, planting trees in the city. rational farming. Currently, many measures have been put in place, but they are not able to completely prevent human actions. Therefore, the government needs to tighten up more polluting activities of people, from which there are sanctions to strictly handle recidivism. In addition, it is advisable to invest in public transport and waste collection areas to avoid polluting water sources. At present, not only in Vietnam but also in many countries around the world are also being devastated causing serious pollution due to unconscious human activities. Therefore, I think the most important thing is that everyone must be aware of their actions and immediately stop activities that affect the environment.
The living
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environment
of
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people
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today
is being
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destroyed
more and more
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. In Vietnam,
currently
, there are
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many
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areas
of natural
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forest
land, plains or sea
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areas
that are being
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affected
by
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human
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activities
leading to unpredictable consequences. It is one of the most concerned problems we are facing.

First
, serious deforestation by loggers along with illegal exploitation of
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forests
by
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people
in mountainous
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areas
such as in the Central Highlands and North Central regions. In recent years there has been deforestation for other purposes such as agriculture, construction of roads and buildings. Deforestation poses serious threats to the
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environment
such as destruction of natural habitats and the loss of the earth's lungs.
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Forest
fires have wiped out
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many
green hills on the
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forest
map of our country. Those are the causes leading to floods, landslides, flash floods causing great loss of life and
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people
's property. In order to conserve
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forests
, there should be immediate sanctions or instructions for
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people
by individuals and
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governments
.

Second, another problem is environmental pollution. In
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some
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areas
of large towns and cities, waste, wastewater, exhaust gases, dust and noise have exceeded the permissible limits, causing great harm to
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human
life and health. Garbage and wastewater not
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only
pollute rivers and underground water sources that provide fresh water for
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humans
,
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but
also
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destroy
the
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environment
of arable land.

Nature's creator has
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given
us
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many
precious things,
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but
we have been
gradually
destroying those valuable things.
Therefore
, each individual and community need to be conscious of preserving and protecting the
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environment
such as not throwing garbage on the street, gathering garbage in the right place, treating waste, planting trees to cause
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forests
, planting trees in the city.
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rational
farming.
Currently
,
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many
measures have
been put
in place,
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but
they are not able to completely
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prevent
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human
actions.
Therefore
, the
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government
needs to tighten up more polluting
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activities
of
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people
, from which there are sanctions to
strictly
handle recidivism.
In addition
, it is advisable to invest in public transport and waste collection
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areas
to avoid polluting water sources.

At present, not
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only
in Vietnam
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but
also
in
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many
countries around the world are
also
being devastated
causing serious pollution due to unconscious
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human
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activities
.
Therefore
, I
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think
the most
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important
thing is that everyone
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must
be aware of their actions and immediately
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stop
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activities
that affect the
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environment
.
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IELTS essay Are there any natural areas in your country that have been affected by human activity? What can be done to protect such places?

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  American English
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