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I have been practicing for the final speaking test around tendays before I took it, personally, I think that the activities helped me a lot. I deal a little with the final topic because I didn’t remember too much about forms of transport, however I did my best and I agree with the score I got, I obtained 6 for the speaking band instead of 5. 5 and it gives me enough confidence to continue practicing with other different topics in order to obtain a better result. In the diagnostic test I hesitate a lot and I had considerable errors, I was extremely nervous in light of the fact that I had never taken an exam with that structure before, and the IELTS speaking exam taught me how to deal with my weaknesses and the best way is to face it and practice to improve my skills. I would like to obtain a better result in the real IELTS exam, it will be a great challenge that I want to master in order to obtain the certification which I really want to have.
I have been practicing for the final speaking
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think
that the activities
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helped
me a lot. I deal a
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little
with the final topic
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because
I didn’t remember too much about forms of transport,
however
I did my best and I
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agree
with the score I
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got
, I obtained 6 for the speaking band
instead
of 5. 5 and it gives me
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enough
confidence to continue practicing with other
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
different
topics in order to obtain a better result.

In the diagnostic
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test
I hesitate a lot and I had considerable errors, I was
extremely
nervous in light of the fact that I had never taken an exam with that structure
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
before
, and the IELTS speaking exam taught me how to deal with my weaknesses and the best way is to face it and practice to
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improve
my
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skills
.

I would like to obtain a better result in the real IELTS exam, it will be a great challenge that I want to master in order to obtain the certification which I
really
want to have.
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