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are school grades an accurate prediction of future success of students?

are school grades an accurate prediction of future success of students? RVQGP

Get a good score is not only a measure of success, actually, but success is also a composite of various matters like intelligence and knowledge, interpersonal skill For example, students with discipline and good work who doing the assignments on time and earning an A grade maybe they just suffice school education, and don’t additional research for assignments and they don't think outside of the box. In addition, a grade point average isn't an indicator of intelligence or interpersonal skills like networking. So, no wonder, these people become the stereotypical corporate drones. But on the contrary side, there are students that they don’t blindly trust the education system and they are willing to do seek out different resources, and they were more struggling with learning. Also, they don’t afraid of failure, and if they don’t succeed picked themselves up and try again and they embrace their shortcomings and learn from them and that it’s an essential factor to success. so It's possible, these rebellious students become more successful than the grade A.

This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
Get
 a This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 score is not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 a measure of success, actually, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 success is also
 a composite of various matters like intelligence and knowledge, interpersonal This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :proficiency
skill


For example
, students with discipline and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 work who doing the assignments on time and earning an A grade maybe they This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
 suffice school education, and don’t additional research for Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).assignments, and
assignments and
 they don't This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
This phrase is redundant. Consider using "outside".outside
outside of
 the box. In addition
, a grade point average isn't an indicator of intelligence or interpersonal This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :proficiencies
skills
 like networking. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
So
, no wonder, these This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 become the stereotypical corporate drones.

This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
But
on the contrary
 side, there are students that they don’t blindly
 trust the education Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).system, and
system and
 they are willing to do seek out This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:various
different
 resources, and they were more struggling with learning. Also
, 'afraid' is not a verb. You should rather write: "they're not afraid".they're not afraid
they don’t afraid
 of failure, and if they don’t succeed picked themselves up and try Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).again, and
again and
 they embrace their shortcomings and learn from them and that it’s an essential factor to success. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterSo
so
 It's possible, these rebellious students become more successful than the grade A. 