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Write about the following topic. Are famous people treated unfairly by the media? Should they be given more privacy, or is the price of their fame an invasion into their private life? Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience

It is well-known, that fame does not come alone, it comes with a price. In this essay, we will discuss both views and, I will also provide the major reason as to why the latter takes preference over the former view. Fame comes through love from the mass. It is then the right of the public that they expect a glimpse into their personal life which is how media comes into picture. It is their job to capture well known people and earn money by revealing their few personal affairs in public. However, this in return aid celebrities as well in return due to the fact the more you are visible on screen the more you become well-known irrespective of the information showed on screen is veracious or not. Once a person receives fame, he/she cannot hide from the limelight. This popularity not only brings pride on the contrary also invites invasion into their personal life. People ought to be open to much extent without getting thwarted owing to the fact that fame comes from the people, for the people and by the people. This is an extremely tiny price one ought to pay to receiving much of love, wealth and delight. For an instance, a couple of days back I saw a popular celebrity paying media for conducting interview at his own dwell and embracing his lifestyle to get the limelight. I believe, media is merely a medium to acquaint the information till public on the contrary it is common people whose intention is to get a number of or the other information about the popular faces they like. The media are doing its job and I also believe even people like celebrities, politicians or any illustrious person would like to show their life to a number of extent in public.
It is well-known, that fame does not
come
alone, it
comes
with a price. In this essay, we will discuss both views and, I will
also
provide the major reason as to why the latter takes preference over the former view.

Fame
comes
through
love
from the mass. It is then the right of the
public
that they
expect
a glimpse into their personal life which is how
media
comes
into picture. It is their job to capture well known
people
and earn money by revealing their few personal affairs in
public
.
However
, this in return aid celebrities
as well
in return due to the fact the more you are visible on screen the more you become well-known irrespective of the information
showed
on screen is veracious or not.

Once a person receives fame, he/she cannot
hide
from the limelight. This popularity not
only
brings pride
on the contrary
also
invites invasion into their personal life.
People
ought to be open to much
extent
without getting thwarted owing to the fact that fame
comes
from the
people
, for the
people
and by the
people
. This is an
extremely
tiny price one ought to pay to receiving much of
love
, wealth and delight. For an instance, a couple of days back I
saw
a popular celebrity paying
media
for conducting interview at his
own
dwell and embracing his lifestyle to
get
the limelight.

I believe,
media
is
merely
a medium to acquaint the information till
public
on the contrary
it is common
people
whose intention is to
get
a number of or the other information about the popular faces they like. The
media
are doing its job and I
also
believe even
people
like celebrities, politicians or any illustrious person would like to
show
their life to a number of extent in
public
.
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IELTS essay Are famous people treated unfairly by the media? Should they be given more privacy, or is the price of their fame an invasion into their private life? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience

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  American English
4 paragraphs
302 words
6.0
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