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We would like to go to North Korea to learn their life. North Korea is a very isolated country that is hard to enter. We will learn the life of the citizens of North Korea and their culture. Our plan is to stay with local families instead of staying at an inn. We will ask them about their daily life, culture, food, jobs and the rules they have to follow. We are also curious about their lives without modern technology. We will film all of their answers and make a short film out of it. We'll also try to film the road, the city and famous places of Korea. We hope to make this film popular and make people know about North Koreans' lives.

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 Korea to learn their life. You use this word too often, consider replacing it withnorthward
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very
 isolated country that is
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hard
 to enter. We will learn the life of the citizens of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withnorthward
North
 Korea and their culture. Our plan is to stay with local families instead
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rules
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have to
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 curious about their This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :resides
lives
 without modern technology. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
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 will film all of their answers and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 a short film out of it. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
We
'll also
 try to film the road, the city and This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:well-known
famous
 places of Korea. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
We
 hope to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 this film popular and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
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people
 know about You use this word too often, consider replacing it withnorthward
North
 Koreans' This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :resides
lives
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