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Growing up, I was fortunate enough to attend quality schools with an array of passionate teachers who truly cared about their students and the subjects they taught. However, I know that not everyone is privileged to have the same chances as me and this educational inequality is entirely unfair and distressing. It's true that some of my greatest moments of personal growth were from the excellent teachers in my life who successfully shifted certain attitudes and viewpoints I had for the better. The harsh nature of Teach First’s programme is something I'm acutely aware of. An acquaintance once told me that her experience as a Teach First Trainee was incredibly challenging, with a student throwing a chair at her on her very first day. Despite this, she persisted onwards and ultimately found it rewarding to show that same student the compassion and empathy he so greatly needed in order to thrive. I found her story with Teach First to be remarkable and it's that sense of deep satisfaction one can have after helping others overcome obstacles in a difficult environment which I liked. I’m keen on joining Teach First because I find value in meaningful work that has a tangible social impact. To me, meaningful work is something which brings out a person’s best qualities but also improves the lives of others. Grit, perseverance and a strong drive to positively change the quality of education of young students from disadvantaged backgrounds are the traits I have which pull me towards this charity.
Growing up, I was fortunate
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enough
to attend quality schools with an array of passionate teachers who
truly
cared about their
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students
and the subjects they taught.
However
, I know that not everyone
is privileged
to have the same chances as me and this educational inequality is
entirely
unfair and distressing. It's true that
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some
of my greatest moments of personal growth were from the excellent teachers in my life who
successfully
shifted certain attitudes and viewpoints I had for the better. The harsh nature of
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Teach
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First’s
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is something I'm
acutely
aware of. An acquaintance once
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told
me that her experience as a
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Teach
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First
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incredibly
challenging, with a
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student
throwing a chair at her on her
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very
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first
day. Despite this, she persisted onwards and
ultimately
found it rewarding to
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show
that same
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student
the compassion and empathy he
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so
greatly
needed in order to thrive. I found her story with
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Teach
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First
to be remarkable and it's that sense of deep satisfaction one can have after helping others overcome obstacles in a difficult environment which I liked. I’m keen on joining
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Teach
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First
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because
I find value in meaningful work that has a tangible social impact. To me, meaningful work is something which brings out a person’s best qualities
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but
also
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improves
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lives
of others. Grit, perseverance and a strong drive to
positively
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change
the quality of education of young
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students
from disadvantaged backgrounds are the traits I have which pull me towards this charity.
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IELTS essay application for a teacher training programme

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
252 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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