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Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening? What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced?

Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening? What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced? LJGG
Yup that right, now-a-days we all produce more rubbish compare to old days. there are many reason behind this scenerio. Firstly, Plastic is the main source because more than 60% of things come in plastic or being wrapped by it. Starting from water bottle and ending at gaint machines. Secondly, another pollutant is exessive waste from houses. Now-a-days people recycle less and throw things out more. In past days people care for their environment but not today. Back in our Country its bizzard, There more than half of population is uneducated which means there living standard and know about earth is pretty much low. They all ahve habit of cleaning thier house not the surrounding, they throw garbage bag, waste and many other stuff. Government only has the power to control such situation. Yes you heared correctly, If authorties don't allow such items to be sold in this type of area automatically rubbish level will be decresed. Government such not allow factory to wrap things which are not necessary or limit the amount of platic which is used. Government should start a seperate section in which people are hired to monitor and handle these type of tasks. In my Homw town there is a well-known company, Nestle. We all once in our life time have eaten some thing made from it. Early 20's they use to bring stuff in big trucks but today they started to bring in big bags. People noticed it and filed a complaint against them because they were producing way over rubbish than normal. In conculsion, Controlling the Rubbish is also in our hand but first if the government takes few steps to control it. Only then we can over come this situation.
Yup that right,
now
-a-days we all produce more
rubbish
compare to
old
days.
there
are
many
reason behind this
scenerio
.
Firstly
, Plastic is the main source
because
more than 60% of things
come
in plastic or
being wrapped
by it. Starting from water bottle and ending at
gaint
machines.
Secondly
, another pollutant is
exessive
waste from
houses
.
Now
-a-days
people
recycle less and throw things out more. In past days
people
care for their environment
but
not
today
.

Back in our Country its
bizzard
, There more than half of population
is uneducated
which means there living standard and know about earth is pretty much low. They all
ahve
habit of cleaning
thier
house
not the surrounding, they throw garbage bag, waste and
many other stuff
.
Government
only
has the power to control such situation. Yes you
heared
correctly
, If
authorties
don't
allow
such items to
be sold
in this type of area
automatically
rubbish
level will be
decresed
.
Government
such not
allow
factory to wrap things which are not necessary or limit the amount of
platic
which is
used
.

Government
should
start
a
seperate
section in which
people
are hired
to monitor and handle these type of tasks. In my
Homw
town there is a well-known
company
, Nestle. We all once in our
life time
have eaten
some thing
made from it. Early
20's
they
use to
bring stuff in
big
trucks
but
today
they
started
to bring in
big
bags.
People
noticed it and filed a complaint against them
because
they were producing way over
rubbish
than normal.

In
conculsion
, Controlling the
Rubbish
is
also
in our hand
but
first
if the
government
takes few steps to control it.
Only
then we can over
come
this situation.
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IELTS essay Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening? What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced?

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