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Anyone can post information on the internet. Some people say most of what we read on the Internet is inaccurate. To what extent do you agree or disagree? v.2

Anyone can post information on the internet. Some people say most of what we read on the Internet is inaccurate. v. 2
Technology has revolutionized tremendously over the years. With the introduction of computers, human life has become very easy. Internet has it' s pros and cons. But personally I believe that it has always been very helpful. Internet is like an encyclopedia of modern times. It has vast amount of information about almost everything and anything. There are various blogs, media companies and other sources which keep posting some or the other information daily. Internet has become a part of life in today' s world. Today, in almost everything we are connected to Internet. For example, to search certain destination, we need maps, also to search about some Individual personality or some big established company, we use internet to check their details. Information which help humans and are actually introduced in the internet to ease human lives, can never be inaccurate. But there is also an argument that some technical information differ in internet, when searched in different supporting websites. For example, a company' s revenue for the current year may differ since people won' t have first hand information about the company unless he/she is the employee of the firm. So, relevance and how genuine the websites or blogs are, will decide whether the information is accurate enough or not. It is hard to say that the information what we read is inaccurate most of the times. Different people have different opinions about something and they give advice according to their individual experiences, hence, here the relevance of the information matters. Factual information in today' s time is hard to believe to be inaccurate, since the whole world is using internet and is almost dependant on it for their economic development. Today, people have improvised information technology effectively, since huge companies rely on them. To conclude, it would be difficult to agree that the information provided on internet would be inaccurate unless the source is genuine and relevant.
Technology has revolutionized
tremendously
over the years. With the introduction of computers, human life has become
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very
easy. Internet has
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it&
#039; s pros and cons.
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But
personally
I believe that it has always been
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very
helpful.

Internet is like an encyclopedia of modern times. It has vast amount of
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information
about almost everything and anything. There are various blogs, media
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companies
and other sources which
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keep
posting
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some
or the other
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information
daily. Internet has become a part of life in
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today&
#039; s world.
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Today
, in almost everything we
are connected
to Internet.
For example
, to search certain destination, we need maps,
also
to search about
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some
Individual personality or
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some
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big
established
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company
, we
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use
internet to
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check
their
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details
.
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Information
which
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help
humans and are actually introduced
The usual collocation for technology is "on," not "in." It is better to say this: "on the internet".
in the internet
to
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ease
human
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lives
, can never be
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inaccurate
.
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But
there is
also
an argument that
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some
technical
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information
differ in internet, when searched in
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different
supporting websites.
For example
, a
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company&
#039; s revenue for the
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current
year may differ since
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people
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won&
#039; t have
'first hand' seems to be a compound adjective in front of a noun. Use a hyphen: "first-hand".
first hand
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information
about the
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company
unless he/she is the employee of the firm.
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So
, relevance and how genuine the websites or blogs are, will decide whether the
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information
is accurate
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enough
or not.

It is
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hard
to say that the
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information
what we read is
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inaccurate
Consider using "most of the time" if you mean "usually" or "very often".
most of the times
.
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Different
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people
have
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different
opinions about
Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
something and
they give advice according to their individual experiences,
hence
, here the relevance of the
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information
matters. Factual
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information
in
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today&
#039; s time is
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hard
to believe to be
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inaccurate
, since the whole world is using internet and is almost
Did you mean "dependent" on?
dependant
on it for their economic development.
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Today
,
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people
have improvised
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information
technology
effectively
, since huge
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companies
rely on them.
To conclude
, it would be difficult to
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agree
that the
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information
provided on internet would be
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inaccurate
unless the source is genuine and relevant.
8Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
24Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
10Mistakes

IELTS essay Anyone can post information on the internet. Some people say most of what we read on the Internet is inaccurate. v. 2

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
318 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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