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Any countries should be able to sell goods( ex. Food , vehicle) to any other countries without any restrictions

Any countries should be able to sell goods( ex. Food, vehicle) to any other countries without any restrictions 7ROb
Towards are one of the most significant item for the countries that to give the goods for the market. However, l agree that countries should sell the productions to another countries without any authority restriction for two main reasons. Firstly, it is widely that in this period there are many countries in the worldwide. So each of them have their own goods. Moreover, despite selling the towards to other countries is a awesome way for their economy; however, the government ought to not mixed with selling, because, nobody knows how the authority welling the goods with rules or humans right.
Towards are one of the most significant item for the
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countries
that to give the
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goods
for the market.
However
, l
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agree
that
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countries
should sell the productions to another
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
countries
without any authority restriction for two main reasons.
Firstly
, it is
widely
that in this period there are
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many
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countries
in the worldwide.
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So
each of them have their
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own
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goods
.
Moreover
, despite selling the towards to other
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countries
is
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a
awesome way for their economy;
however
, the
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government
ought to not mixed with selling,
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because
, nobody knows how the authority welling the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
goods
with
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
rules
or humans right.

IELTS essay Any countries should be able to sell goods( ex. Food, vehicle) to any other countries without any restrictions

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  American English
1 paragraphs
100 words
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