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Currently, many individuals have tended to know more about the history of buildings or accommadation where they staying. In this essay will discuss why people doing that and support my opinion. The reason for knowing trends may vary. One of the most important reason for this is to ensure the safety of construction materials. In addition to, some materials may be affected over time. Furthermore, to know the nature of the building area. For instance, some flats wer built above agricultural land make this be endangerd in the future. On the other hand, several ways would help reach the history of these buildings and houses. The easiest way is asking the previous owner or the engineer who built it. If the flat was constructed by goverment, the person might be return the documents of building. Searching on the Internet and asking the neighbours could be  a way of obtaining it. To conclude, the individuals might be intrested in the construction of their buildings. Beside this the good news is there are various manners to find it
Currently
,
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many
individuals have tended to know more about the history of
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buildings
or
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accommadation
where
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they staying
. In this essay will discuss why
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people
doing that and support my opinion.

The reason for knowing trends may vary. One of the most
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important
reason for this is to ensure the safety of construction materials.
In addition
to,
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some
materials may be
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affected
over time.
Furthermore
, to know the nature of the
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building
area.
For instance
,
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some
flats
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wer
built above agricultural land
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make
this be
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endangerd
in the future.

On the other hand
, several ways would
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help
reach the history of these
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buildings
and
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houses
. The easiest way is asking the previous owner or the engineer who built it. If the flat
was constructed
by
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goverment
, the person might be return the documents of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
building
. Searching on the Internet and asking the
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neighbours
could be
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a way of obtaining it.

To conclude
, the individuals might be
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intrested
in the construction of their
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
buildings
. Beside this the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
news is there are various manners to find
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it

IELTS essay answer the second writing question

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
175 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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