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animals are in danger of extinction. some people say that we should protect only those animals, which are useful to humans. do you agree or disagree?

animals are in danger of extinction. some people say that we should protect only those animals, which are useful to humans. A5Kl
Every species in these world including Human and animals are cycle. Same peuple Says the those environment conserve useful to people in life. However, I disagree animals are we should animals which are their daily basis of with the tapic because Other alsa meaninyful for nature balance. The important reason for most Saving of they are part all animals that ecosystem. Every species ot wild life balance of life our plays. a pole muinterin the ter eurth. So, the loss of any spe Cies indirectly. Human Such us Can affects dopeniling an cuw, buffailo, gout i camel and people frod some of the animal on. Generally milk as their duily life, Some people uses uses Cow and buffala in cod dung as fertilizer and arganic fertilizer. This Cow manure is fertilizer aenteiming gwth of coops. an essen tial for hadl thy nutrient Mozeover, other animals people think that all must be protected. The main these wild etistence of humun beings. wild animul peason behind that the wild animals are beneficial scientists 'have could for found Some Tretment Such. cun be used to heal skin diseuses, The rectetionel viecaw gng of of revenue. be as medical the Skin ot fish which. as animals at is also Zoo SourceThe financial valve to many counties. However, there negative paints of soving too meny the number animals become more of wild species is uretul are Same amimals. than outside from people of societies number become nature cycle becume unsterble. then they might Come the jungle and It Can't be hunt the taleroble if unstuble atherwise of animul ind ecusystem, So, saving conclude ll in the To play is oucial our duty, because they help us in them many ways.
Every species in these world including Human and
animals
are cycle. Same
peuple
Says the those environment conserve useful to
people
in
life
.
However
, I disagree
animals
are we should
animals
which are their daily basis of with the
tapic
because
Other
alsa
meaninyful
for nature balance. The
important
reason for most Saving of they are part all
animals
that ecosystem. Every species
ot
wild
life
balance of
life
our plays.
a
pole
muinterin
the
ter
eurth
.
So
, the loss of any
spe
Cies
indirectly
. Human Such us Can affects
dopeniling
an
cuw
,
buffailo
, gout i camel and
people
frod
some of the
animal
on.
Generally
milk as their
duily
life
,
Some
people
uses
uses
Cow and
buffala
in cod dung as fertilizer and
arganic
fertilizer. This Cow manure is fertilizer
aenteiming
gwth
of coops.
an
essen tial
for
hadl
thy nutrient
Mozeover
, other
animals
people
think
that all
must
be protected
. The main these wild
etistence
of
humun
beings.
wild
animul
peason
behind that the wild
animals
are beneficial scientists 'have could for found
Some
Tretment
Such.
cun
be
used
to heal skin
diseuses
, The
rectetionel
viecaw
gng
of of
revenue.
be
as medical the
Skin ot
fish which.
as
animals
at is
also
Zoo
SourceThe
financial valve to
many
counties.
However
, there
negative
paints of
soving
too
meny
the number
animals
become more of wild species is
uretul
are Same
amimals
.
than
outside from
people
of societies number become nature cycle
becume
unsterble
.
then
they might
Come
the jungle and It Can't be
hunt
the
taleroble
if
unstuble
atherwise
of
animul
ind
ecusystem
,
So
, saving conclude ll in the To play is
oucial
our duty,
because
they
help
us in them
many
ways.
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IELTS essay animals are in danger of extinction. some people say that we should protect only those animals, which are useful to humans.

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