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Some people believe that clean and neat streets are the responsibility pf residents, others believe that it is the responsibility of the government. Discuss both views and give your opinion?

Some people believe that clean and neat streets are the responsibility pf residents, others believe that it is the responsibility of the government. 2JYo
Cleanliness is a very important issue in our lives. Positive vibes are evident in a clean environment. It is argued by some that it is the responsibility of citizens to keep the roads, especially around our homes clean, while many believe that our regime is responsible for this. I clearly believe that both the authority and the common man should take steps to keep their surroundings clean, which I will do my best to defend in the forthcoming essay with the help of examples. First, every citizen who is a resident of our country has been given the right to move to any part of the country of his choice. Therefore, if a citizen is given so much freedom to live his life under our Constitution and democracy, then it is also the first duty of that citizen to pay attention to keeping the environment around him, such as roads, etc. clean. For example, in the big cities of the country like Mumbai, the number of factories and industrial areas is increasing on daily basis. Due to which pollution is increasing. To control this, every citizen should pay maximum attention to cleanliness and keep the habitat around them clean and tidy, at the same time, plant more trees to avoid further pollution of the environment. Steps should be taken to clean up roads where dirty water accumulates on rainy days as many deadly diseases like Dengue caused by contaminated water can be curbed. At the same time, the authority should take a number of steps for a cleaner atmosphere, such as raising awareness among the general public about the importance of cleanliness and encouraging citizens to keep their surroundings clean. In addition, every authenticated tube well through which water enters people's homes should be fitted with clean water filters to prevent contamination caused by contaminated water. Consequently, clean water can be used for any kind of household work and drinking water shall be kept clean. To conclude, even though the inhabitant has a very important contribution to make in keeping his surroundings clean, it cannot be denied but still, the regime and the common citizen have an equal responsibility to do their utmost to keep the atmosphere clean and tidy. Contribution is mandatory to the cause, because only in a clean environment does pure humanity develops.
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vibes are evident in a
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clean
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environment
. It
is argued
by
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some
that it is the responsibility of
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citizens
to
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keep
the roads,
especially
around our homes
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clean
, while
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many
believe that our regime is responsible for this. I
clearly
believe that both the authority and the common
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man
should take steps to
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keep
their surroundings
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clean
, which I will do my best to defend in the forthcoming essay with the
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help
of examples.

First
, every
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citizen
who is a resident of our country has been
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given
the right to
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move
to any part of the country of his choice.
Therefore
, if a
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citizen
is
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given
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so
much freedom to
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live
his life under our Constitution and democracy, then it is
also
the
first
duty of that
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citizen
to pay attention to keeping the
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environment
around him, such as roads, etc.
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clean
.
For example
, in the
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big
cities of the country like Mumbai, the number of factories and industrial areas is increasing on daily basis. Due to which pollution is increasing. To control this, every
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citizen
should pay maximum attention to cleanliness and
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
keep
the habitat around them
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clean
and tidy, at the same time, plant more trees to avoid
further
pollution of the
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environment
. Steps should
be taken
to
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clean
up roads where dirty
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water
accumulates on rainy days as
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many
deadly diseases like Dengue caused by contaminated
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water
can
be curbed
.

At the same time, the authority should take a number of steps for a cleaner atmosphere, such as raising awareness among the
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general public
about the importance of cleanliness and encouraging
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citizens
to
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keep
their surroundings
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clean
.
In addition
, every authenticated tube well through which
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water
enters
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people
's homes should
be fitted
with
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clean
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water
filters to
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prevent
contamination caused by contaminated
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water
.
Consequently
,
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clean
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water
can be
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used
for any kind of household work and drinking
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water
shall be
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kept
clean.

To conclude
,
even though
the inhabitant has a
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very
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important
contribution to
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make
in keeping his surroundings
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clean
, it cannot
be denied
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but
still
, the regime and the common
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citizen
have an equal responsibility to do their utmost to
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keep
the atmosphere
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clean
and tidy. Contribution is mandatory to the cause,
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because
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only
in a
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clean
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environment
does pure humanity
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develops
.
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IELTS essay Some people believe that clean and neat streets are the responsibility pf residents, others believe that it is the responsibility of the government.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
386 words
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