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Zoos are sometimes seen as necessary but not poor alternatives to a natural environment. Discuss some of the arguments for and against keeping animals in zoos. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Zoos are sometimes seen as necessary but not poor alternatives to a natural environment. Discuss some of the arguments for and against keeping animals in zoos. lEKo
Zoos are well known to display heterogeneous collection of animals to people and education them on wild animals. It is one major source to view animals that we don’t get to see everywhere in our daily life. But to what extent Zoos are necessary is disputable. The following essay analyses the various pros and cons of zoos. Firstly, Wild animals are trapped from their natural habitat and are kept in cages and tiny artificial habitat that is created in the zoo. We see many cases where these wild animals are not taken proper care. They have little space to move around and don’t open live in groups. They are also trapped for years in the zoo. This does not help to preserve the wild animals but willinstead exaggerate the wild life. On the other hand, many animals that lived hundreds of years ago are not seen any more. Our younger generations might not get to even see the various wild animals that currently exist. One such example is mammoth. These animals lived in the cold climatic conditions and disappeared gradually with the changing weather conditions. Many animals in wild die due to starvation. This can also be avoided in zoos. Additionally, some wild animals like deer have so protection from other wild animals. Animals like lions, tigers kill other animals that live in the forest for their survival. This also can be avoided in zoos. Alternatively, to preserve animals like tigers that are reducing in number, there are various foundations in different countries. One such organization is black jaguar white tiger. It is different from zoo, here the animals are taken proper care and are also provided with the habitat that they would live in. In conclusion, zoos are helpful to preserve animals and protect them from various conditions they face in wild but also its necessary to provide proper habitat for them to live.
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animals
to
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people
and education them on wild
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animals
. It is one major source to view
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animals
that we don’t
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get
to
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see
everywhere in our daily life.
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But
to what extent Zoos are necessary is disputable. The following essay analyses the
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various
pros and cons of zoos.

Firstly
, Wild
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animals
are trapped
from their natural
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habitat
and are
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kept
in cages and tiny artificial
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habitat
that
is created
in the zoo. We
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see
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many
cases where these wild
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animals
are not taken proper care. They have
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little
space to
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move
around and don’t open
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live
in groups. They are
also
trapped for years in the zoo. This does not
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help
to preserve the wild
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animals
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but
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willinstead
exaggerate the wild life.

On the other hand
,
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many
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animals
that
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lived
hundreds of years ago are not
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seen
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any more
. Our younger generations might not
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get
to even
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see
the
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various
wild
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animals
that
currently
exist. One such example is mammoth. These
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animals
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lived
in the
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cold
climatic conditions and disappeared
gradually
with the changing weather conditions.
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Many
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animals
in wild
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die
due to starvation. This can
also
be avoided
in zoos.
Additionally
,
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some
wild
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animals
like deer have
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so
protection from other wild
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animals
.
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Animals
like lions, tigers kill other
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animals
that
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live
in the forest for their survival. This
also
can
be avoided
in zoos.

Alternatively
, to preserve
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animals
like tigers that are reducing in number, there are
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various
foundations in
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different
countries. One such organization is black jaguar white tiger. It is
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different
from zoo, here the
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animals
are taken
proper care and are
also
provided with the
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habitat
that they would
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live
in.

In conclusion
, zoos are helpful to preserve
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animals
and protect them from
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various
conditions they face in wild
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but
also
its necessary to provide proper
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habitat
for them to
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live
.
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IELTS essay Zoos are sometimes seen as necessary but not poor alternatives to a natural environment. Discuss some of the arguments for and against keeping animals in zoos.

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
315 words
6.5
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