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animals and wildlife and pets pea13
1. without a doubt, it’s dogs. For me, they ‘re cute. i love playing with them and often spend time watching videos about them. They are also extremely loyal and can help protect their home from intruders or thieves 2. for me, the animal i don’t like the most is cockroaches. House cockroaches are harmful insects for daily life and health. They have a habit of living in dirty places, destroying and contaminating food, they can gnaw and damage some items such as clothes, fabrics, book covers. . . 3. I think the best places to see wildlife are in national parks. Since these areas are uninhabited by people, various types of wildlife are able to flourish. There is also a great variety of animals and plants here
1. without a doubt, it’s dogs. For me, they ‘re cute.
Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.
i
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love
playing with them and
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often
spend time watching videos about them. They are
also
extremely
loyal and can
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help
protect their home from intruders or thieves

2. for me, the animal
Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.
i
don’t like the most is cockroaches.
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House
cockroaches are harmful insects for daily life and health. They have a habit of living in dirty places, destroying and contaminating food, they can gnaw and damage
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some
items such as clothes, fabrics, book covers.
Don't put a space before the full stop
.
Don't put a space before the full stop
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3. I
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think
the best places to
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see
wildlife are in national parks. Since these areas
are uninhabited
by
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people
, various types of wildlife are able to flourish. There is
also
a great variety of animals and plants
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here
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IELTS essay animals and wildlife and pets

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
127 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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