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An increasing number of people are now using the internet to meet new people and socialise. Some people think this has brought people closer together while others think people are becoming more isolated? Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

An increasing number of people are now using the internet to meet new people and socialise. Some people think this has brought people closer together while others think people are becoming more isolated? GK7w

because of such actions, those individuals may never gain the confidence to face the real world and form meaningful interaction with the people outside as it is extremely important that young children have and extend real friendships in order to develop their own interpersonal skills. In conclusion, internet is one of the greatest thing mankind has brought upon this world. Depending on how we use it, it may bring us benefits as well as bring disadvantages with it. It may have made people isolated to some extent but it still has so much positive benefits as it unites people together in a way.

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