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An increasing number of people are now using the internet to meet new people and socialise. Some people think this has brought people closer together while others think people are becoming more isolated? Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

An increasing number of people are now using the internet to meet new people and socialise. Some people think this has brought people closer together while others think people are becoming more isolated? GK7w
because of such actions, those individuals may never gain the confidence to face the real world and form meaningful interaction with the people outside as it is extremely important that young children have and extend real friendships in order to develop their own interpersonal skills. In conclusion, internet is one of the greatest thing mankind has brought upon this world. Depending on how we use it, it may bring us benefits as well as bring disadvantages with it. It may have made people isolated to some extent but it still has so much positive benefits as it unites people together in a way.
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of such actions, those individuals may never gain the confidence to face the real world and form meaningful interaction with the
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people
outside as it is
extremely
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important
that young children have and extend real friendships in order to develop their
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own
interpersonal
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skills
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In conclusion
, internet is one of the greatest thing mankind has brought upon this world. Depending on how we
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use
it, it may bring us benefits
as well
as bring disadvantages with it. It may have made
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people
isolated to
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some
extent
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it
still
has
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much
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benefits as it unites
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people
together in a way.

IELTS essay An increasing number of people are now using the internet to meet new people and socialise. Some people think this has brought people closer together while others think people are becoming more isolated?

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