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An increasing number of people are buying what the need online. What are the advantages and disadvantages.

Now technology play an indispensable part of our modern society. In modern era, everybody is busy for minting money, they use convenient type things which makes our life easy and comfortable. Most of the people use online application and buy all necessary things which we need in our daily life. To begin with, it has a lot of benefits. Firstly, we are not waste our time to find certain things every type of things, are available on our phone. We booked our ticket in advance.
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technology play an indispensable part of our modern society. In modern era, everybody is busy for minting money, they
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convenient type things which
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our life easy and comfortable. Most of the
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people
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online application and
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all necessary things which we need in our daily life. To
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with, it has
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benefits.
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, we are not waste our time to find certain things every type of things, are available on our phone. We booked our ticket in advance.

IELTS essay An increasing number of people are buying what the need online. What are the advantages and disadvantages.

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