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An important festivals in your country.

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Every year, the beginning of the spring, which usually starts at the end of the March, visitors from all over the country gather in Namangan region to witness the nicest festival –“The flowers”. Preperation for the big occation begin months in advance. Gardeners from all over the country come and participate with their flowers and unusual plants. They designed some beautiful buildings, thins with garment of flowers. . Furthermore, you can come across some other beautiful birds, they are look like live. The main part of the festival takes place in a big stage in the evenings. You can see and have a rest by wathching beautifully dressed dancers dance, some popular singer’s sing their lovely songs. In addition you may rise your mood by listen Jokers’ joke. Besides that your children can play on the play ground or play on a sew saw. There are many coffees where you can cool by drink fyzzi drinks or eating ice- creams. And, there are numerous play stations where children do not annoy. Festival continue for ten days. Every one has fun at the festival. The whole city and hundreds of, thounds of visitors look forward to this nice event every day.
Every year, the beginning of the spring, which
usually
starts
at the
end
of the March, visitors from all over the country gather in
Namangan
region to witness the nicest
festival
–“The flowers”.

Preperation
for the
big
occation
begin
months in advance. Gardeners from all over the country
come
and participate with their flowers and unusual plants. They designed
some
beautiful
buildings, thins with garment of flowers.
.
Furthermore
, you can
come
across
some
other
beautiful
birds, they are look like
live
.

The main part of the
festival
takes place in a
big
stage in the evenings. You can
see
and have a rest by
wathching
beautifully
dressed dancers dance,
some
popular singer’s sing their lovely songs.

In
addition you
may rise your mood by listen Jokers’ joke.

Besides
that your children can
play
on the
play
ground or
play
on
a sew
saw
. There are
many
coffees where you can cool by drink
fyzzi
drinks or eating ice- creams. And, there are numerous
play
stations where children do not annoy.
Festival
continue for ten days.

Every one has fun at the
festival
. The whole city and hundreds of,
thounds
of visitors look forward to this nice
event
every day.
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IELTS essay An important festivals in your country.

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