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An american actor said that future is important thing in life. What is the benefit of individual and country should more attention on future rather than past.

An american actor said that future is important thing in life. What is the benefit of individual and country should more attention on future rather than past. o1E3D
In recent days, some people believe that future is more important while some people says that past is always going to affect your future. It is necessary to focus on your past mistakes to make your present and future bright. Analysing the merits of planning future in your present has more good outcomes rather than stuck to the past problems. For instance, if the individual is scheduling there routine work before the day starts it will help them to work properly and they will able to manage there time and able to complete there work without getting pilling up. Addition to this person will get punctual about there timing and they will able to achieve there daily task management. As a result individual will achieve good results and people will be influenced by them. Furthermore, if the government is making plans for the future they should focus on the past mistakes so that they will able to work better for the country. For example, if the ruling party is planing yearly budget for the country it will help them to analyse that on which area they should focus more or less related to the finance condition. This method will give good results and able to maintain proper expenditure of the country. In conclusion, I prefer that one should focus on the future rather than sticking to the past. This will be helpful to individual as well as for the country’s development.
In recent days,
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some
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people
believe that
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future
is more
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important
while
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some
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people
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says
that
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past
is always going to affect your
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future
. It is necessary to
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focus
on your
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past
mistakes to
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make
your present and
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future
bright.

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Analysing
the merits of planning
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future
in your present has more
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good
outcomes
rather
than stuck to the
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past
problems.
For instance
, if the individual is scheduling there routine
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work
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before
the day
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starts
it will
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help
them to
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work
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properly and
they will
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able
to manage there time and
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able
to complete there
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work
without getting pilling up. Addition to this person will
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get
punctual about there
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timing and
they will
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able
to achieve there daily task management.
As a result
individual will achieve
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good
results and
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people
will
be influenced
by them.

Furthermore
, if the
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government
is making plans for the
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future
they should
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focus
on the
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past
mistakes
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so
that they will
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able
to
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work
better for the country.
For example
, if the ruling party is planing yearly budget for the country it will
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help
them to
Possible spelling mistake. 'analyse' is British English.
analyse
that on which area they should
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focus
more or less related to the finance condition. This method will give
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
results and
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able
to maintain proper expenditure of the country.

In conclusion
, I prefer that one should
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focus
on the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
future
rather
than sticking to the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
past
. This will be helpful to individual
as well
as for the country’s development.
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IELTS essay An american actor said that future is important thing in life. What is the benefit of individual and country should more attention on future rather than past.

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241 words
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