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describe a piece of furniture that helps you relax

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My ancient bookshelf is my sole precious asset, which helps me unwind from many stressful times. When I was 8 years old, my close relatives gave me a beautifully expensive bookholder as a special birthday gift. The cupboard was placed in my luxurious huge living room so that I am able to share its uses with my family members. My meaningful present is brown and black with ironwood layers. There are four small parts of the shell for me to place the various kind of books. The self-help books are set at the top of my lovely bookshelf. All of my colorful favorite botanical materials from across the globe are stacked in the center of the bookcase. In the bottom drawer of the bookcase, my parents also have a lot of domestic references to science fiction research. , which provides them with a wide range of scientific knowledge. Reading some collected books from the bookcase has been becoming our evening ritual, which is indispensable for my family to relax. Besides, scanning novels always make me feel relieved when I am under pressure. I plan to hammer more nails into the cabinet because I will be buying more English culture books. The bookshelf is my idyllic space for me to chill out.
My ancient bookshelf is my sole precious asset, which
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helps
me unwind from
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stressful times. When I was 8 years
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, my close relatives gave me a
beautifully
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bookholder
as a special birthday gift. The cupboard
was placed
in my luxurious huge living room
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so
that I am able to share its
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uses
with my family members. My meaningful present is brown and black with ironwood layers. There are four
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small
parts of the shell for me to place the various kind of
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books
. The self-
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help
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books
are set
at the top of my lovely bookshelf. All of my colorful favorite botanical materials from across the globe
are stacked
in the center of the bookcase. In the bottom drawer of the bookcase, my parents
also
have
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a lot of
domestic references to science fiction research.
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,
which provides them with a wide range of scientific knowledge. Reading
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some
collected
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books
from the bookcase has been becoming our evening ritual, which is indispensable for my family to relax.
Besides
, scanning novels always
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make
me feel relieved when I am under pressure. I plan to hammer more nails into the cabinet
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because
I will be buying more English culture
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. The bookshelf is my idyllic space for me to chill out.
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IELTS essay describe a piece of furniture that helps you relax

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
211 words
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