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Amount of people owning a car has increased over the period of last 3 decades

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Amount of people owning a car has increased over the period of last 3 decades and as a result cities all over the globe are now a ‘one gigantic traffic jam’. In my opinion this is a hidden statement no one thinks upon on the contrary is completely true and a number of steps should be taken as early as possible in order to cater this issue. To begin with, car has become a extremely critical part our routine life. We use it daily to go to office, drop children to school and to go for a long drive whenever we are bored. A world without cars is unimaginable by a normal person. They provide us maximum level of comfort during every commute we make. As a result every citizen residing in a city tends to purchase a car for him without thinking about if he actually needs it. On the flip side, due to everyone purchasing a car for themselves has given rise to traffic in the urban areas. Governments are not able to develop the infrastructure that can handle such a high density of vehicles. This causes long traffic jams during the rush hours on the city roads. Hence, the comfortable car ride becomes a trap in which we are stuck for hours wasting precious time of our life. The government should increase taxes on the price of cars which will encourage people to opt for alternatives such as public transport and electric cycles. In conclusion, we can say that if everyone buys a car there will be no space for others and hence, the mere reason for purchasing a car ‘The Comfort’ will be useless.
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has increased over the period of last 3 decades and
as a result
cities all over the globe are
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now
a ‘one gigantic traffic jam’. In my opinion this is a hidden statement no one
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thinks
upon
on the contrary
is completely true and a number of steps should
be taken
as early as possible in order to cater this issue.

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has become
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critical part our routine life. We
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use
it daily to go to office, drop children to school and to go for a long drive whenever we
are bored
. A world without
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cars
is unimaginable by a normal person. They provide us maximum level of comfort during every commute we
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make
.
As a result
every citizen residing in a city tends to
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purchase
a
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car
for him without thinking about if he actually needs it.

On the flip side, due to everyone purchasing a
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car
for themselves has
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given
rise to traffic in the urban areas.
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Governments
are not able to develop the infrastructure that can handle such a high density of vehicles. This causes long traffic jams during the rush hours on the city roads.
Hence
, the comfortable
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car
ride becomes a trap in which we
are stuck
for hours wasting precious time of our life. The
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government
should increase taxes on the price of
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cars
which will encourage
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people
to opt for alternatives such as public transport and electric cycles.

In conclusion
, we can say that if everyone
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buys
a
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car
there will be no space for others and
hence
, the mere reason for purchasing a
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car
‘The Comfort’ will be useless.
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IELTS essay Amount of people owning a car has increased over the period of last 3 decades

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  American English
4 paragraphs
278 words
6.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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