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Public places are noisy. What are the causes of this and what do you think should be done about it?

Public places are noisy. What are the causes of this and what do you think should be done about it? almDm
Noise pollution is one of the widely discussed issues nowadays and no one can deny the fact that public places such as markets, playgrounds are the major contributors to this environmental problem. Although people have time and again stood up for this, they are the main reason behind these loud surroundings. In my opinion, with certain laws and restrictions, the problem can be reduced. The below paragraphs will discuss the causes and ways to reduce unwanted noises. Firstly, society is the main culprit behind noise pollution. People indulge in various activities, for example, parties, social or cultural events where they use loudspeakers to play songs and make announcements, causing an increase in noise levels. Secondly, public places have become extra crowded these days, more people means more vehicles and the honking sound or engine sound from the vehicles also contributes to this issue. Hence, directly or indirectly, human beings are the main reason for this. Nevertheless, there are certain measures that can help the atmosphere around public places be more peaceful. To start with, the government can make some rules like fixed timings to play the music in events; the safe volume levels. Additionally, authorities can provide proper parking spaces for personal cars in marketplaces to avoid traffic in the areas that will reduce honking. Furthermore, an individual can keep a self-check to minimise the unwanted noises, thus, providing a better place to live in for other human beings and animals. To conclude, noise pollution is not something that cannot be reduced. With proper awareness among the public about the problem and its effects, it can be controlled. Together, the government and society can make the world a peaceful place to live i
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Noise
pollution is one of the
widely
discussed issues nowadays and no one can deny the fact that
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public
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places
such as markets, playgrounds are the major contributors to this environmental problem. Although
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
have time and again stood up for this, they are the main reason behind these loud surroundings. In my opinion, with certain laws and restrictions, the problem can be
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
reduced
. The below paragraphs will discuss the causes and ways to
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reduce
unwanted noises.

Firstly
, society is the main culprit behind
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noise
pollution.
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People
indulge in various activities,
for example
, parties, social or cultural
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events
where they
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use
loudspeakers to play songs and
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make
announcements, causing an increase in
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noise
levels.
Secondly
,
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public
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places
have become
The extreme adjective for crowded is "packed".
extra crowded
these days, more
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people
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means
more vehicles and the honking sound or engine sound from the vehicles
also
contributes to this issue.
Hence
,
directly
or
indirectly
, human beings are the main reason for this.

Nevertheless
, there are certain measures that can
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help
the atmosphere around
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public
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places
be more peaceful. To
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start
with, the
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government
can
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make
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some
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rules
like
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fixed
timings to play the music in
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events
; the safe volume levels.
Additionally
, authorities can provide proper parking spaces for personal cars in marketplaces to avoid traffic in the areas that will
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reduce
honking.
Furthermore
, an individual can
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keep
a self-
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check
to
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minimise
the unwanted
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noises
,
thus
, providing a better
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place
to
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live
in for other human beings and animals.

To conclude
,
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noise
pollution is not something that cannot be
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reduced
. With proper awareness among the
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public
about the problem and its effects, it can
be controlled
. Together, the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
government
and society can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
the world a peaceful
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place
to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
live
i
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IELTS essay Public places are noisy. What are the causes of this and what do you think should be done about it?

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282 words
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