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Ambition is an important character for people who want to be successful in life.

Ambition is an important character for people who want to be successful in life. 5B0aN
There is no doubt that to get big results ambitiousness is really imperative. It matters to give directions to human lives. It has become debatable questions whether it is advantageous or not. I, however, believe that upon people how they are dealing with it. How ambitious character is crucial in oder to lead successful life? First, ambitions play part and parcel role in people's life. As a result, ambitions gives direction to life as-well-as they become motivated and enthusiastic. Because they have to achieve their goals. Thus, individuals will spend more time in productive manner. So masses focuse to get their goal, people do work always without getting tired. They will curious to do something as-well-as to know something. However, there are many negative characteristics behind this situation. Firstly, if person is over - obsessed with his aim, people become unconscious about things and activities. They can avoid small happiness of daily life. They can avoid to spend time with near and dear ones. Secondly, they can choose to negative way to get aim at any cost. They can anything to fulfill their desire. Finally, it does not matter about following rules, respect, relations with their other, just because of their quest. As a result, they can do block - out human feelings. To sum up, although this issue puts negative characteristics impact upon people, but it's positive cannot be neglected.
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. It has become debatable questions whether it is advantageous or not. I,
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to lead successful
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will curious
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However
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characteristics behind this situation.
Firstly
, if person is over
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obsessed with his aim,
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people
become unconscious about things and activities. They can avoid
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happiness of daily
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. They can
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time with near and dear ones.
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aim at any cost. They
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can anything
to fulfill their desire.
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, respect, relations with their other,
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because
of their quest.
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, they can do block
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out human feelings.

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characteristics impact upon
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,
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IELTS essay Ambition is an important character for people who want to be successful in life.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
231 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 5.5
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