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Describe a shop that you enjoy going to

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I enjoy going to Muji store which just opening in early July last year in HCM city. And it located in the center of district 1. The store is full of variety of products, from notebooks to pens, shoes or handbags and even some clothing. It seems like a stationery but it has less items and more about selling notebook. I usually go there when I need a new notebook or pen. But sometimes if I have some spare cash on me I will indulge myself with something else that catches my eye too. And when I’m looking for gifts, I also go to Muji too, because it has great items for people of all ages. They have really nice decoration which are vintage, modern and popular among teenagers. The section I like the most that is follow me create my own products and it is perfect for those looking for something more unique.
I enjoy going to
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Muji
store which
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opening in early July last year in
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HCM
city. And it located in the center of district 1. The store is full of variety of products, from notebooks to pens, shoes or handbags and even
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clothing. It seems like a stationery
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but
it has
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less
items and more about selling notebook. I
usually
go there when I need a new notebook or pen.
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But
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sometimes
if I have
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some
spare cash on me I will indulge myself with something else that catches my eye too. And when I’m looking for gifts, I
also
go to
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Muji
too,
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because
it has great items for
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people
of all ages. They have
really
nice decoration which are vintage, modern and popular among
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teenagers
. The section I like the most
that is
follow me create my
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own
products and it is perfect for those looking for something more unique.

IELTS essay Describe a shop that you enjoy going to

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
154 words
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