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Although the prices of fuels have greatly increased over the last decade or two, it is argued that further increases in fuel prices are the only way to reduce world consumption of fuel and lessen pressure on the world’s fuel resources. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? v.1

Although the prices of fuels have greatly increased over the last decade or two, it is argued that further increases in fuel prices are the only way to reduce world consumption of fuel and lessen pressure on the world’s fuel resources. with this statement? v. 1
Oil, gas and coal are all non-renewable resources. This is known worldwide, as well as the fact that society lives above its demands. Even though fuel prices have increased significantly over the last decade, consumption will still cause these resources to run out eventually. It has been argued that the only way to decrease the usage of fuel is to further increase the prices. Currently, most people think in the present and do not consider the future enough. Therefore, to affect people in their everyday lives, fuel prices ought to be raised. It is theorised that this will significantly decrease fossil fuel usage, as economic impact will be forced onto current users. It is necessary that fuel prices are high enough to immediately decrease the wealth of a family and make more people switch to public transport. Critics of this would argue, however, that society’s fossil fuels, such as petrol for cars, have an inelastic price and that price hikes would have no effect other than increasing tax and oil company revenues. In addition, a significant increase in prices would not only impact each individual, but also a whole economy. Fuel prices are not only linked to transport, for example, but also to food production, home heating and entertainment. A rise in prices in all these areas would seriously affect the standard of living of families with limited income and would mean the poorer parts of society would become even poorer. In conclusion, while raising fuel prices is one of the most commonly-discussed solutions to fuel usage problems, this answer includes too many negative variables. Certainly, increasing fuel prices would create a small reduction of transport usage, but the far-reaching effects would be unfair and unsustainable.
Oil, gas and coal are all non-renewable resources. This
is known
worldwide,
as well
as the fact that society
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lives
above its demands.
Even though
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fuel
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prices
have increased
significantly
over the last decade, consumption will
still
cause these resources to run out
eventually
. It has
been argued
that the
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only
way to decrease the
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usage
of
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fuel
is to
further
increase the prices.

Currently
, most
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people
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think
in the present and do not consider the future
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enough
.
Therefore
, to affect
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people
in their everyday
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lives
,
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fuel
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prices
ought to
be raised
. It is
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theorised
that this will
significantly
decrease fossil
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fuel
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usage
, as economic impact will
be forced
onto
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current
users. It is necessary that
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fuel
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prices
are high
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enough
to immediately decrease the wealth of a family and
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make
more
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people
switch to public transport. Critics of this would argue,
however
, that society’s fossil
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fuels
, such as petrol for cars, have an inelastic
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price
and that
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price
hikes would have no effect other than increasing tax and oil
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company
revenues.

In addition
, a significant increase in
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prices
would not
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only
impact each individual,
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but
also
a whole economy.
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Fuel
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prices
are not
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only
linked to transport,
for example
,
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but
also
to food production, home heating and entertainment. A rise in
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prices
in all these areas would
seriously
affect the standard of living of families with limited income and would mean the poorer parts of society would become even poorer.

In conclusion
, while raising
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fuel
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prices
is one of the most
commonly
-discussed solutions to
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fuel
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usage
problems, this answer includes too
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many
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negative
variables.
Certainly
, increasing
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fuel
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prices
would create a
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
small
reduction of transport
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usage
,
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but
the far-reaching effects would be unfair and unsustainable.
15Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
24Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
1Mistakes

IELTS essay Although the prices of fuels have greatly increased over the last decade or two, it is argued that further increases in fuel prices are the only way to reduce world consumption of fuel and lessen pressure on the world’s fuel resources. with this statement? v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
286 words
6
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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