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Although the prices of fuels have greatly increased over the last decade or two, it is argued that further increases in fuel prices are the only way to reduce world consumption of fuel and lessen pressure on the world’s fuel resources. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? v.4

Although the prices of fuels have greatly increased over the last decade or two, it is argued that further increases in fuel prices are the only way to reduce world consumption of fuel and lessen pressure on the world’s fuel resources. with this statement? v. 4
Despite the fossil fuel prices have an extremely high boom for the two decades, some people still want to have this phenomenon to prevent people from using these categories of energy. From my own perspective, I do not advocate the given statement. It is undeniable that a significant rise in the cost of fuels is a great help in limiting the consumption of energy. The plain truth is that the more extravagant a product is, the less expenditure people spend on buying it in order to maintain their budget. Therefore, the pressure on the natural energy resources will be lessened. However, this measure can cause some profoundly adverse impacts. Since petrol prices are not only linked to transport, but also linked indirectly to food production, home heating. A rise in prices in all these areas would seriously affect the standard of living of the family with limited income. As a result, the growth of oil and gas costs will create new problems. On the other hand, the government could do something to tackle the high fuel costs. First, they should search for other alternative energy resources which keeps intact or at least preserves the Earth’s natural resources such as solar, tidal and wind energy. For example, in Vietnam, governments are now playing an important role in encouraging people and companies to install solar panels and use wind power. In addition, they should also raise people’s awareness and the proper use of these natural materials. Henceforth, the public can perceive the importance of fossil fuels and replace it by using eco-friendly or green energy. As aforementioned explanations, I suggest that applying higher cost for petrol should be accompanied with other solutions in a suitable way to reduce the burden on natural resources
Despite the fossil
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fuel
prices have an
extremely
high boom for the two decades,
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some
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people
still
want to have this phenomenon to
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prevent
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people
from using these categories of
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energy
. From my
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own
perspective, I do not advocate the
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given
statement.

It is undeniable that a significant rise in the
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cost
of
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fuels
is a great
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help
in limiting the consumption of
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energy
. The plain truth is that the more extravagant a product is, the less expenditure
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people
spend on buying it in order to maintain their budget.
Therefore
, the pressure on the
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natural
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energy
resources will
be lessened
.
However
, this measure can cause
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some
profoundly
adverse impacts. Since petrol prices are not
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only
linked to transport,
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but
also
linked
indirectly
to food production, home heating. A rise in prices in all these areas would
seriously
affect the standard of living of the family with limited income.
As a result
, the growth of oil and gas
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costs
will create new problems.

On the other hand
, the
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government
could do something to tackle the high
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fuel
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costs
.
First
, they should search for other alternative
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energy
resources which
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keeps
intact or at least preserves the Earth’s
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
natural
resources such as solar, tidal and wind
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
energy
.
For example
, in Vietnam,
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governments
are
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now
playing an
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important
role in encouraging
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people
and
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companies
to install solar panels and
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use
wind power.
In addition
, they should
also
raise
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people’s
awareness and the proper
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use
of these
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
natural
materials. Henceforth, the public can perceive the importance of fossil
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
fuels
and replace it by using eco-friendly or green energy.

As aforementioned explanations, I suggest that applying higher
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cost
for petrol should be
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accompanied with
other solutions
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in a suitable way
to
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reduce
the burden on
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natural
resources
12Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
22Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
2Mistakes

IELTS essay Although the prices of fuels have greatly increased over the last decade or two, it is argued that further increases in fuel prices are the only way to reduce world consumption of fuel and lessen pressure on the world’s fuel resources. with this statement? v. 4

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
290 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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