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Although more and more people read news on the internet, newspapers will remain the most important source of news. To what extent do you agree or disagree? v.20

Although more and more people read news on the internet, newspapers will remain the most important source of news. v. 20
Even though there is a rapid increase in the number of people who read news online, another important part of the worldwide population considers traditional newspapers to be a more reliable and important information source. Nevertheless, it is my firm belief that the internet has many advantages newspapers do not, and will therefore replace the majority of them. In the first place, it is important to consider that every newspaper article can be found online. Each media service such as BBC, The New York Times or The Guardian has their own website in which they post all the latest news. Such articles have the same sources as those printed in newspapers, guaranteeing the reliability of the uploaded material. For instance, should readers choose to search for news online, they would certainly have the option to access multiple platforms which lead to a variety of different opinions. Additionally, searching for a specific article online is faster and easier than going through the pages of a newspaper, due to the ability to look for them using keywords or filtering specific topics. Furthermore, it is not only faster to access to news online, but it is also cheaper. The grand majority of news websites such as BBC news are free, although there are others like The New York Times, which ask its readers to pay for a subscription before they can access all the featured content on their site. However, the latter might still be better than buying a copy of the newspaper. According to Times spokeswoman Eileen Murphy, each copy of the New York Times cost $2 for each Monday through Saturday edition, while each Sunday edition cost up to $6. This leaves a total of $18 per week, which is relatively high compared to the monthly subscription of $16. 99 offered by the same print on their website. In conclusion, it is foreseeable that the internet might replace newspapers in the near future due to the advantages it offers that the latter cannot. It is safe to say that using the internet as a main source of information gives readers the ability to navigate through different sources as well as choosing better and cheaper options to spend their money on if they so desire.
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who read
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online
, another
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important
part of the worldwide population considers traditional
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newspapers
to be a more reliable and
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important
information
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source
.
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, it is my firm belief that the internet has
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many
advantages
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newspapers
do not, and will
therefore
replace the majority of them.

In the
first
place, it is
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important
to consider that every
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newspaper
article can
be found
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online
. Each media service such as BBC, The
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New
York
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Times
or The Guardian has their
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own
website in which they post all the latest
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news
. Such articles have the same
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sources
as those printed in
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newspapers
, guaranteeing the reliability of the uploaded material.
For instance
, should readers choose to search for
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news
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online
, they would
certainly
have the option to access multiple platforms which lead to a variety of
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different
opinions.
Additionally
, searching for a specific article
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online
is faster and easier than going through the pages of a
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newspaper
, due to the ability to look for them using keywords or filtering specific topics.

Furthermore
, it is not
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only
faster to access to
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news
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online
,
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but
it is
also
cheaper. The grand majority of
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news
websites such as BBC
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news
are free, although there are others like The
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New
York
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Times
, which ask its readers to pay for a subscription
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before
they can access all the featured content on their site.
However
, the latter might
still
be better than buying a copy of the
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newspaper
. According to
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Times
spokeswoman Eileen Murphy, each copy of the
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New
York
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Times
cost $2 for each Monday through Saturday edition, while each Sunday edition cost up to $6. This
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leaves
a total of $18 per week, which is
relatively
high compared to the monthly subscription of $16. 99 offered by the same print on their website.

In conclusion
, it is foreseeable that the internet might replace
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
newspapers
in the near future due to the advantages it offers that the latter cannot. It is safe to say that using the internet as a main
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source
of information gives readers the ability to navigate through
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
different
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sources
as well
as choosing better and cheaper options to spend their money on if they
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so
desire.
9Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
9Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
9Mistakes

IELTS essay Although more and more people read news on the internet, newspapers will remain the most important source of news. v. 20

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
373 words
9
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 9.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 9.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 9.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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