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Although more and more people read News on internet.

Although more and more people read News on internet. XVGwY
Nowadays people use more and more mobile phone to show online news. However people prefer th conventional newspaper as a main source of news. I completely disagree with the continued interest of conventional newspaper going forward There are several advantage of using technology. Firstly, in present era latest news are very fast update in internet. Forthere, latest news are updates in few minutes and you Wil have shown in details about news in your mobile phone. Secondly, you looking news like as you show as live. Internet provide live vidios on their news channel. On the other hand, people spend money to buy a newspaper. They also Save money use of online news. They are not need to extra money for buying newspaper. Moreover, newspaper company are west lot's of time to addition, printing, and dispatch newspaper home to home. Besides, lots of trees cutting to make paper. They are also save lots of trees and forests.
Nowadays
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people
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use
more and more mobile phone to
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show
online
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news
.
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However
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people
prefer
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conventional
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newspaper
as a main source of
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news
. I completely disagree with the continued interest of conventional
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newspaper
going
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forward


There are
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several advantage
of using technology.
Firstly
, in present era
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latest
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news
are
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very
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fast
update in internet.
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Forthere
,
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latest
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news
are updates in few minutes and
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you Wil
have shown in
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details
about
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news
in your mobile phone.
Secondly
,
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you looking
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news
like as you
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show
as
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live
. Internet provide
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live
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vidios
on their
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news
channel.

On the other hand
,
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people
spend money to
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buy
a
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newspaper
. They
also
Save money
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use
of online
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news
. They are not
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need
to extra money for buying
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newspaper
.
Moreover
,
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newspaper
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company
are west
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lot's
of time to addition, printing, and dispatch
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newspaper
home to home.
Besides
, lots of trees cutting to
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make
paper. They are
also
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save
lots of trees and forests.
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IELTS essay Although more and more people read News on internet.

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
157 words
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