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Some people say that reading news paper on paper is good. Other believe that it can be gain by other media. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some people say that reading news paper on paper is good. Other believe that it can be gain by other media. lWjoD
Nowadays due to amelioration in science and technology there are plethora of choice for knowing news. Such as it is readily available in smartphones, laptops and many more media. Some people argue that reading newspapers is best way to know the latest news, while other believe that it can be easily known via other medias. According to my perspective, I believe that reading news with the aid of media gives best way of learning and gaining knowledge of news. Both aspects along with my perspective is elborated in ensuing paragraphs.
Nowadays due to amelioration in science and technology there are plethora of choice for knowing
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news
. Such as it is
readily
available in smartphones, laptops and
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many
more media.
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Some
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people
argue that reading newspapers
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is best
way to know the latest
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
news
, while other believe that it can be
easily
known via other medias. According to my perspective, I believe that reading
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
news
with the aid of media
A determiner is probably missing here: "gives the best".
gives best
way of learning and gaining knowledge of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
news
. Both aspects along with my perspective is
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elborated
in ensuing paragraphs.

IELTS essay Some people say that reading news paper on paper is good. Other believe that it can be gain by other media.

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
90 words
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4.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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