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Alternative forms of transport should be encouraged and international laws introduced to control car ownership and use. Agree or disagree with reasons and examples from knowledge or personal experience.

Alternative forms of transport should be encouraged and international laws introduced to control car ownership and use. Agree or disagree with reasons and examples from knowledge or personal experience. 15A9L
Transportation by vehicles is one of the oldest means of transportation. Other means of transportation should be supported, with intentionally recognized regulations aimed at monitoring car ownership and usage. Different transportation means like air and waterways should be support. Global car ownership and use laws which stupulates the maximum age of a vehicle been used by people. The law should also state the recommended profile of car owners. Firstly, laws which are accepted globally should be enacted to promote the use of air transport. The laws should also ensure that local airline operators are supported financially, air crafts made more secured for commuters, more routes opened to meet commuters needs and air tickets made cheaper for commuters. A supporting law would profile prospective car owners to be a minimum of 30 years, be married, and the vehicle should not be more than ten years old, for such a vehicle to be allowed to be used in the country. Recently, I visited South Africa, I observed that air transportation is very popular, with over 60% of the populace traveling by air transport and less than 30% of commuters own and use a car. I also noted during my trip that, any vehicle older than 10years old is recycled, the government provided a law to support the affected companies people. Air transport is very fast and safe. Secondly, another globally accepted law should be enacted to promote transportation through the waterways. Speed boats, which is a waterway transportation medium, can provide short distance trips which may not be covered by air lines. Furtermore, I observed that in South Africa, speed boats are popular amongst the populace who patronise it for intra-city and inter-city trips. The popularity of transportation through the waterways, has led to South Africa, been less poluted unlike other countries. In conclusion, globally accepted laws which would promote air transport and waterways transportation, would lead to less environmental pollution, quicker movement of people and improved productive.
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. Other means of
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recognized regulations aimed at monitoring
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car
ownership and usage.
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transportation
means like
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air
and
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waterways
should be support. Global
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car
ownership and
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use
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laws
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stupulates
the maximum age of a
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vehicle
been
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used
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people
. The
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should
also
state the recommended profile of
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car
owners.

Firstly
,
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laws
which are
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globally should
be enacted
to promote the
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use
of
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air
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transport
. The
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laws
should
also
ensure that local airline operators
are supported
financially
,
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air
crafts made more secured for
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commuters
, more routes opened to
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meet
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commuters
needs and
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air
tickets made cheaper for
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commuters
. A supporting
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law
would profile prospective
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car
owners to be a minimum of 30 years,
be married
, and the
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vehicle
should not be more than ten years
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old
, for such a
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vehicle
to be
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allowed
to be
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used
in the country. Recently, I visited South Africa, I observed that
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air
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transportation
is
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very
popular, with over 60% of the populace traveling by
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air
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transport
and less than 30% of
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commuters
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own
and
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use
a
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car
. I
also
noted during my trip that, any
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vehicle
older than 10years
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old
is recycled
, the
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government
provided a
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law
to support the
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affected
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companies
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people
.
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Air
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transport
is
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and safe.

Secondly
, another globally
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accepted
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should
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to promote
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through the
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waterways
. Speed boats, which is a
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waterway
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transportation
medium, can provide short distance trips which may not
be covered
by
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air
lines.
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Furtermore
, I observed that in South Africa, speed boats are popular amongst the populace who
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patronise
it for
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intra-city
and inter-city trips. The popularity of
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transportation
through the
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waterways
, has led to South Africa, been less
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poluted
unlike other countries.

In conclusion
, globally
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laws
which would promote
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air
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transport
and
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waterways
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transportation
, would lead to less environmental pollution, quicker movement of
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people
and
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improved
productive.
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IELTS essay Alternative forms of transport should be encouraged and international laws introduced to control car ownership and use. Agree or disagree with reasons and examples from knowledge or personal experience.

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