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All people should go to university, even if they are not going to use that education In their job. Do you agree or disagree?

All people should go to university, even if they are not going to use that education In their job. 0AwdB
Education is vital and essential for living a better life. Nowadays, enrolling to the best performing and world-class universities is common. In this essay, I will discuss the argument from both the sides and give my opinion why it should not be a compulsion to go to university. Many people are fond of getting a higher education to get handsome pay in the future. Pursuing such higher studies make a significant dent in the bank balance as the fees charged by the universities are not affordable. This results to take the education loans. A large pool of the students passed out from such universities even do not get the job with a higher pay scale which can earn them a considerable amount of money to repay the education loan. If I have made a decision that the degree I will receive from the university, that will not be going to useful for the job in the future, I would not go to the university and waste the money. Rather, I would spend money on subscribing some other relevant courses which would be beneficial for me in my life and job purposes. There are many people who spend money on getting undesirable education thinking that degree will be helpful for them for negotiation while applying for a job but later it does not help. To summarise my view, looking at the time, money and efforts going to waste if the degree I will pursue, that may not help me in my job, I would not go to the university. Hence, I strongly disagree with it.
Education
is vital and essential for living a better life. Nowadays, enrolling to the best performing and world-
class
universities
is common. In this essay, I will discuss the argument from both the sides and give my opinion why it should not be a compulsion to go to university.

Many
people
are fond of getting a higher
education
to
get
handsome pay in the future. Pursuing such higher studies
make
a significant dent in the bank balance as the fees charged by the
universities
are not affordable. This results to take the
education
loans. A large pool of the students passed out from such
universities
even do not
get
the
job
with a higher pay scale which can earn them a considerable amount of
money
to repay the
education
loan.

If I have made a decision that the degree I will receive from the
university
, that will not be going to useful for the
job
in the future, I would not go to the
university
and waste the
money
.
Rather
, I would spend
money
on subscribing
some
other relevant courses which would be beneficial for me in my life and
job
purposes. There are
many
people
who spend
money
on getting undesirable
education
thinking that degree will be helpful for them for negotiation while applying for a
job
but
later it does not
help
.

To
summarise
my view, looking at the time,
money
and efforts going to waste if the degree I will pursue, that may not
help
me in my
job
, I would not go to the
university
.
Hence
, I
strongly
disagree with it.
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IELTS essay All people should go to university, even if they are not going to use that education In their job.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
264 words
6.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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