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All over the world, the rich are becoming richer and the poor are becoming poorer.

All over the world, the rich are becoming richer and the poor are becoming poorer. VlW86

On a global scale, wealthy people are getting wealthier and poor people are getting poorer. In my point of view, the issue is with income unfairness, government regulations, and community traditions. the only way to find a solution to poverty is to abolish this restriction and avoid our cultural judgment. Income unfairness is wide- range. Mostly historical, political or religious interfere such as war, epidemics, and other natural or non-natural disasters. Also, governments are doing their best to close or shorter these gaps but it seems harder than we think. When the gap is created Crime will increase and other social problems will so. There are many ways to overcome these issues by creating a more fair system for everyone and stable social community management. Someone who held the opposing view would say that history politics or religion has nothing to deal with that. For example, Canada is one of the best countries in the world with multifaith and politics but it still has a strong governmental system and high income for individuals. Also one lowest the country with the world in government corruption. this is because of the. this is due to their social management and their senior executive are well managed. World wide range, rich people are increasing their self income in a desperate way and poor people are significantly drooping down their financial status. In my opinion, these problems are with income inequality, government policies, and social-cultural. the way to solve these problems is to avoid these rules and our traditional behavior.

On a global scale, wealthy You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
 are getting wealthier and poor You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
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income
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government
 regulations, and community traditions. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterThe
the
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only
 way to find a solution to poverty is to abolish this restriction and avoid our cultural judgment.

Income unfairness is wide- range. Mostly
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governments
 are doing their best to close or shorter these gaps This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 it seems harder than we This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
. When the gap is created
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so
. There are This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 ways to overcome these issues by creating a more This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :equitable
fair
 system for everyone and stable social community management.

Someone who held the opposing view would say that history politics or religion has nothing to deal with that. For example
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multifaith
 and politics This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
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 has a strong governmental system and high You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsalarywagerevenueprofitpaycash
income
 for individuals. Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?Also,
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 one lowest the country with the world in You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpowerministryunionauthoritystaterule
government
 corruption. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterThis
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because
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this
 is due to their social management and their senior executive are well managed.

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World wide
 range, rich You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
 are increasing their self You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsalarywagerevenueprofitpaycash
income
Consider replacing "in a desperate way" with the adverb for "desperate"; e.g., "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
in a desperate way
 and poor You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
 are significantly
 drooping down their financial status. In my opinion, these problems are with You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsalarywagerevenueprofitpaycash
income
 inequality, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpowerministryunionauthoritystaterule
government
 policies, and social-cultural. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterThe
the
 way to solve these problems is to avoid these This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :requirements
rules
 and our traditional behavior. 