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Advertising helps businesses reach potential customers

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Advertising is a form of commercial communication that helps businesses reach potential customers. Through many social media like websites, television, or youtube. . . , people can find products they want to buy and their information without difficulty. So sellers can know who the customers they need and concentrate on recommending to consumers. For example, when I want to buy something, I can contact marketers to be well-informed and get their help. And then, they know I am a target audience. In the past, marketers had to go around to introduce their goods to clients. It takes a lot of effort. But nowadays, just advertising through mass media, people will know them. Everything is getting easier
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helps
businesses reach potential customers.

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social media like websites, television, or
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youtube
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,
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people
can find products they want to
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buy
and their information without difficulty.
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So
sellers can know who the customers they need and concentrate on recommending to consumers.

For example
, when I want to
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buy
something, I can contact marketers to be well-informed and
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get
their
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help
. And then, they know I am a target audience.

In the past, marketers had to go around to introduce their
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goods
to clients. It takes
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a lot of
effort.
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But
nowadays,
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just
advertising through mass media,
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people
will know them. Everything is getting
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easier

IELTS essay Advertising helps businesses reach potential customers

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
115 words
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 5.5
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Task Achievement: 6.0
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