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all children should learn to speak a foreign language as soon as they start school . how far do you agree or disagree

all children should learn to speak a foreign language as soon as they start school. how far 8a6kG
In the developing world children have more opportuninties to learn new languages in that respect they should be tought at the beginning of the school period. I strongly agree with this statement, and I will try to explain it in this essay Firstly young children have a determination to learn foreign languages than olders. Becouse they can remember quickly any any words that they watched on tv, advertisement or listened to radio or something like that. furthermore it is easy for children to imitate. To them everything is new like new words, food, friends, teachers and so on. The most interesting thing is that it doesn't take long time time in order to get used to all of them unlike adults. Secondly they have some characteristics that are suitable to learn foreign languages for example they don't fear of making some mistakes or are not ashamed of something however they can speak anywhere as much as they want without embarrassment. Such advantages always help them to invent new things in their childhood. thirdly children at the age of 6 or 7 who are strong stomach to any changes in their life. For example even you give them impossible work they don't become under the pressure anyway. By this i mean that we definitely can send our offisprings to one of the language tutorincluding english, russion and french or something like that. In addation they will study in complate way of learning foreign with their friends for example at compitations at school. According to some people it is too early that learning language since first grade at school, by this they mean that they should start at least fifth or sixth grade however these days the demand for language is increasing. In addation you receive a lot of knowladge during whole school period In conclusion as humans get older their learning ability decreases as you know the early the better. I would say that pupil should speak in foreign nicely unless they finish school
In the developing world
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have more
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opportuninties
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new
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languages
in that respect they should
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be tought
at the beginning of the
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school
period. I
strongly
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essay


Firstly
young
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children
have a determination to learn
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foreign
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languages
than
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olders
.
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Becouse
they can remember
quickly
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any any
words that they
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watched
on
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tv
, advertisement or listened to radio or something like that.
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furthermore
it is easy for
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children
to imitate. To them everything is
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new
like
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new
words, food, friends, teachers and
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so
on. The most interesting thing is that it doesn't take long
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time time
in order to
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get
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used
to all of them unlike adults.
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they have
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some
characteristics that are suitable to learn
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foreign
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languages
for example
they don't fear of making
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some
mistakes or are not ashamed of something
however
they can speak anywhere as much as they want without embarrassment. Such advantages always
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help
them to invent
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new
things in their childhood.
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thirdly
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children
at the age of 6 or 7 who are strong stomach to any
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changes
in their life.
For example
even you give them impossible work they don't become under the pressure anyway. By this
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i
mean that we definitely can
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our
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offisprings
to one of the
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language
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tutorincluding
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english
,
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russion
and french or something like that. In
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addation
they will study in
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complate
way of learning
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foreign
with their friends
for example
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compitations
at school.

According to
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it is too early that learning
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since
first
grade at
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, by this they mean that they should
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start
at least fifth or sixth grade
however
these days the demand for
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language
is increasing. In
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addation
you receive
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a lot of
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knowladge
during whole
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period


In conclusion
as humans
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older their learning ability decreases as you know
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better. I would say that pupil should speak in
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foreign
nicely
unless they finish
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school
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IELTS essay all children should learn to speak a foreign language as soon as they start school. how far

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
332 words
5.5
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