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All cars that burn fossil fuels should be banned and electric cars should replace them. Do you agree or disagree?

There is no doubt that gasoline vehicles have a drastic impact and electric cars are the best substitute for them. To that, I agree that there is an intense need of replacing electric vehicles with traditional cars. Just to magnify my argument with Noise and Air pollution, the need for electric engines is the need of the moment. According to the latest research, the changing patterns of climate, the rising temperatures, the world needs to look upon the fact that combustion vehicles, if not banned would increase the earth’s temperature by 1. 5 Centigrade. With the advancement in technology, companies like Tesla are constantly introducing Electric vehicles that are environmentally friendly and are much efficient than gas-driven cars. Moreover, with the advancement in the Automobile industry, companies manufacturing Combustion vehicles are shifting towards hybrid and fully electric vehicles supporting the fact that they are energy efficient and require much less maintenance than fuel-driven cars. This shift in the industry will greatly impact the consumer market, creating a trend of driving zero-emission cars because of highly efficient electric engines and low maintenance costs. With that, I conclude that at this time, just to breathe clean air and travel in a sustainable vehicle, we on our own need to bring the change by avoiding combustion engines and preferring Electric vehicles, so that we can save the upcoming generations this beautiful earth. The government and Automobile industries should effort jointly in bringing this change as soon as possible to make our environment pollution-free.
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have a drastic impact and
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cars are the best substitute for them. To that, I
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that there is an intense
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electric
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with traditional cars.

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need
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electric
engines is the
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need
of the moment. According to the latest research, the changing patterns of climate, the rising temperatures, the world
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needs
to look upon the fact that combustion
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vehicles
, if not banned would increase the earth’s temperature by 1. 5 Centigrade. With the advancement in technology,
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companies
like Tesla are
constantly
introducing
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Electric
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vehicles
that are
environmentally
friendly and are much efficient than gas-driven cars.

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, with the advancement in the Automobile industry,
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companies
manufacturing Combustion
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vehicles
are shifting towards hybrid and
fully
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electric
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vehicles
supporting the fact that they are energy efficient and require much less maintenance than fuel-driven cars. This shift in the industry will
greatly
impact the consumer market, creating a trend of driving zero-emission cars
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because
of
highly
efficient
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electric
engines and low maintenance costs.

With that, I conclude that at this time,
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to breathe clean air and travel in a sustainable
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, we on our
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own
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need
to bring the
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change
by avoiding combustion engines and preferring
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Electric
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vehicles
,
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so
that we can save the upcoming generations this
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beautiful
earth. The
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government
and Automobile industries should
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effort
jointly
in bringing this
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as
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as possible to
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IELTS essay All cars that burn fossil fuels should be banned and electric cars should replace them.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
250 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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