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Air transport is increasingly used to export types of fruits and vegetables to countries where they cannot be grown or are out of season.some people say it is a good thing, but other people think it can't be justified. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Air transport is increasingly used to export types of fruits and vegetables to countries where they cannot be grown or are out of season. some people say it is a good thing, but other people think it can't be justified. gbBpO
It has been a matter of intense debate that whether air transport brings more gains to export diverse types of fruits and vegetables or not. Different people have different mindsets. However, from my perspective, air transport is a good method to export fruits and vegetables. Discussing the former viewpoint, the prime argument put forth by the proponent is that the countries bonding become strong. To be more precise, various types of eatery products, which are not grown in other countries. When these nations either export or import these products by air transport. Thus the nations bonding become strengthen.
It has been a matter of intense debate that whether air transport brings more gains to export diverse types of fruits and vegetables or not.
Different
people
have
different
mindsets.
However
, from my perspective, air transport is a
good
method to export fruits and vegetables.

Discussing the former viewpoint, the prime argument put forth by the proponent is that the countries bonding become strong. To be more precise, various types of eatery products, which are not grown in other countries. When these nations either export or import these products by air transport.
Thus
the nations bonding become strengthen.
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IELTS essay Air transport is increasingly used to export types of fruits and vegetables to countries where they cannot be grown or are out of season. some people say it is a good thing, but other people think it can't be justified.

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