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Agreement Disagrrement essay task 2

Agreement Disagrrement essay task 2 WYxRa
In some states mostly people have difficulties in the health with eating fast food too much. Government need to rise a tax on this food. I strongly agree with it that the government need to rise a tax. In the following paradraphs i am going to show the reasons of my agreements with examples and somehow the reasons of my disagreements. Firstly, fast food products contain chemicals that may not be noticeable to humans. But the human immune system requires nutritious food. Excessive consumption of fast food leads to gastric disease. Secondly, in ancient times people wer healthier than now. Because there was no fast food at that time. I think, in one side, it depends on a person eating right and healthy. For instance, today, high blood pressure, stroke and other serious illnesses are on the rise. On the other hand, there is some beneficial sides of fast food. We do not waste our time for cooking food at home. In some reasons we save our time by purchasing food while in a hurry. As a result by buying it other tasks are also performed on time. To sum up, it is good to increase the price of fast food, which can be seen for the above reasons. If the tax price were added to the product, people would have consumed healthier foods rather than buying them.
In
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some
states
mostly
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people
have difficulties in the health with eating
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fast
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food
too much.
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Government
need to rise a tax on this
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food
. I
strongly
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agree
with it that the
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government
need to rise a tax. In the following
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paradraphs
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i
am going to
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show
the
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reasons
of my agreements with examples and somehow the
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reasons
of my disagreements.

Firstly
,
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fast
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food
products contain chemicals that may not be noticeable to humans.
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But
the human immune system requires nutritious
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food
. Excessive consumption of
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fast
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food
leads to gastric disease.

Secondly
, in ancient
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times
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
Possible spelling mistake found.
wer
healthier than
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now
.
“Because” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
Because
there was no
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fast
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food
at that
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time
. I
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think
, in one side, it depends on a person eating right and healthy.
For instance
,
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today
, high blood pressure, stroke and other serious illnesses are on the rise.

On the other hand
, there is
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some
beneficial sides of
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fast
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food
. We do not waste our
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time
for cooking
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food
at home. In
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some
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reasons
we save our
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time
by purchasing
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food
while in a hurry.
“As” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
As
a result by buying it other tasks are
also
performed on time.

To sum up, it is
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good
to increase the price of
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fast
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food
, which can be
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seen
for the above
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reasons
. If the tax price were
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
added
to the product,
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
would have consumed healthier
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
foods
rather
than buying them.
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IELTS essay Agreement Disagrrement essay task 2

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
228 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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