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Disadvantages of fast food

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Living in the more modern life means busy routines and busier social lives and that goes with the increase in eating fast food. Junk food seems to be the best choice to save time but there are lots of negative aspects behind it. Firstly, fast food has many positive sides, for example, it’s convenient but this convenience is the danger come to many health issues. Most fast foods contain several substances, namely, fats, salts, cholesterol, and so on, which leads to not provide enough nutrients. For instance, the rate of people becoming obese is ever-increasing in some developing countries. Furthermore, taking too much fast food makes humans be not independent of survival skills, especially cooking. It's a matter of the fact happening during Covid pandemic, people have to be at home to prevent from virus and be self-employed about cooking due to both deliveries and fast-food restaurants aren't working. Last but not least, fast food is used on a daily basis, which leads to people lost the chance to enjoy warm meals with family. It can be seen that family mealtime is the most comfortable one in the day because members can gather together whilst eating and relaxing after a hard-working day. In conclusion, there are indeed numerous drawbacks regarding the consumption of fast food, however, if people know how to use it wisely, its benefits will be greater.
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and that goes with the increase in eating
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fast
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. Junk
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food
seems to be the best choice to save time
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but
there are lots of
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negative
aspects behind it.

Firstly
,
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food
has
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many
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this convenience is the
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danger
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health issues. Most
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foods
contain several substances,
namely
, fats, salts, cholesterol, and
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on, which leads to not provide
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enough
nutrients.
For instance
, the rate of
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people
becoming obese is ever-increasing in
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some
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developing countries
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Furthermore
, taking too much
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food
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makes
humans be not independent of survival
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skills
,
especially
cooking. It's a matter of the fact happening during
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have to
be at home to
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from virus and be self-employed about cooking due to both deliveries and
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-food restaurants aren't working.

Last
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not least,
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is
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used
on a daily basis, which leads to
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people
lost the chance to enjoy warm meals with family. It can be
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seen
that family mealtime is the most comfortable one in the day
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because
members can gather together whilst eating and relaxing after a
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hard
-working day.

In conclusion
, there are
indeed
numerous drawbacks regarding the consumption of
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,
however
, if
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people
know how to
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use
it
wisely
, its benefits will be greater.
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IELTS essay Disadvantages of fast food

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
229 words
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