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internet widely used noways

internet widely used noways 8LoLm

Science and technology play an important role in the life of the common man. The computer is one of the biggest achievements of technology. In today's world, the computer is used every field as to whether corporate offices, Banks, government organizations, etc. to do work. We needed a resource that could be used to connect computers to each other. The Internet has become a resource for sending files to organizations, writing emails, chatting with anyone anywhere in the world, sending and receiving money anywhere. Nowadays, it has become an essential need in common man life. It's been almost two years since the epidemic hit. All organizations, schools, shops, markets are closed for security purposes. Then internet is widely used as if schools are trained their teachers to teach students online, corporate companies tell to their employees to do work from home that can be possible with the help of internet.

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 every field Consider shortening this phrase to just "whether", or rephrase the sentence to avoid "as to".whether
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