The number of destitute is rising in many important cities around the world. But we can do some task to stop this growth and solve this problem as soon as we can
The main cause of homelessness is the cost of accommodation. Nowadays, if someone wants to buy a home or flat she or he needs to pay a lot of money to buy each of them. A person or family save their money for many years, but the cost of houses is increasing every day because of inflation and they can cope with buying a place. One solution is to subside accommodation for people. Also, the Government can do it and provide cheaper homes for poor people. On the other hand, the government can build asylum in the city and announce to destitute to go there at night.
Another reason for the growth of homelessness is the shortage of land to build cheap homes. Important cities are spreading every day and population of them is rising so they need homes and facilities like playground, hospitals, groceries, etc. So the lands of around them are grabbed and there isn’t any free space around them. Cities can tackle this problem by building more tower blocks with flats. This task makes that building occupy less area and more persons can live within a specified land. Moreover, the price of flats, reduces and more people can buy these places.
Finally, governments and people can overcome this difficulty by some solutions, but it’s needed to do these works soon. Because this issue harms our city and society. At first, the government should cost a lot of money to handle this dilemma, but it’s worthwhile for the country and people in the following.
The number of destitute is rising in
many
important
cities
around the world.
But
we can do
some
task to
stop
this growth and solve this problem as
soon
as we can
The main cause of homelessness is the cost of accommodation. Nowadays, if someone wants to
buy
a home or flat she or he needs to pay
a lot of
money to
buy
each of them. A person or family save their money for
many
years,
but
the cost of
houses
is increasing every day
because
of
inflation and
they can cope with buying a place. One solution is to subside accommodation for
people
.
Also
, the
Government
can do it and provide cheaper
homes
for poor
people
.
On the other hand
, the
government
can build asylum in the city and announce
to destitute to
go there at night.
Another reason for the growth of homelessness is the shortage of land to build
cheap
homes
.
Important
cities
are spreading every day and population of them is rising
so
they need
homes
and facilities like playground, hospitals, groceries, etc.
So
the lands of around them
are grabbed
and there isn’t any free space around them.
Cities
can tackle this problem by building more tower blocks with flats. This task
makes
that building occupy less area and more persons can
live
within a specified land.
Moreover
, the price of flats,
reduces
and more
people
can
buy
these places.
Finally
,
governments
and
people
can overcome this difficulty by
some
solutions,
but
it’s needed to do these works
soon
.
Because
this issue harms our city and society. At
first
, the
government
should cost
a lot of
money to handle this dilemma,
but
it’s worthwhile for the country and
people
in the following.
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