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agree or disagree Life today is easier and more comfortable than it was when your grandparents were children。 v.2

agree or disagree Life today is easier and more comfortable than it was when your grandparents were children。 v. 2
Yes, I totally agree with this point is that, " Life today is easier and more comfortable than it was when your grandparents were chlidren" . Now a days we are in 21 century which is the most faster and comfortable life. Every things is easier than it prevoius like transportation, hospitals facilities ans much more. Consider the the facility of transportation. Now a days it is very easy to go from one palce to another palce with on few time. Also we can travek oversea with few hours. It makes our life so easy and fast as well as more comfort. But this not before few years back. Our grandparent have to struggle lot to travle from one palce to another palce. There was no such facilties to travel long distace in short time. They have very hard life. They have used tradition vechicals to travel which are to comfortable for them like cart, boat. Moreover, when I think about the internet facility. This internet make the country very closer to you. You can send it any thing to another country with one days or with few time. Such if I want to send the cake to my sister then I can order it onlne And send it with few hours to USA from India why because of internet facility. This not before some decay when our grandparent used the mailing facilty which is so time comsumeing and not realiable. They have to wait at leat 1 month to send any sort stuff to another country. Furthermore, the facility of hospitals with advanced technology and well educated doctors make our life so secure and comfort than before some year back. Now a day you get emergency facility when are in trouble. However this is not happened when my gradmother was seriously injured. She was dead because of lack of emergency facility. Now this not situation in 21 century. All things are changes. Life beacome more easier and confort. So finalli I conculde that we are noe safer than our grandparents.
Yes, I
totally
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agree
with this point is that,
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&quot
;
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Life
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today
is easier and more comfortable than it was when your
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grandparents
were
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chlidren&quot
;
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.
Did you mean "nowadays"?
Now a days
we are in
Did you mean "21st century"?
21 century
which is the
Use only "faster" (without 'most') when you use the comparative.
most faster
and comfortable
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life
.
'Each', 'every', 'either' and 'neither' are used with singular. Did you mean "all"?
Every
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things
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is
easier than it
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prevoius
like transportation, hospitals facilities ans much more.

Consider
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the the
facility of transportation.
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Now a days
it is
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very
easy to go from one
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palce
to another
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palce
with on few
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time
.
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Also
we can
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travek
oversea with few hours. It
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makes
our
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life
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so
easy and
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fast
as well
as more comfort.
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But
this not
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before
few years back. Our
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grandparent
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have to
struggle lot to
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travle
from one
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palce
to another
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palce
. There was no such
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facilties
to travel long
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distace
in short
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time
. They have
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very
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hard
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life
. They have
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used
tradition
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vechicals
to travel which are
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to
comfortable for them like cart, boat.

Moreover
, when I
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think
about the internet facility. This internet
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make
the country
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very
closer to you. You can
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send
it
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any thing
to another country with
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one days
or with few
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time
. Such if I want to
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send
the cake to my sister then I can order it
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onlne
And
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send
it with few hours
A determiner is probably missing here: "to the USA".
to USA
from India why
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because
of internet facility. This not
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before
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some
decay when our
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grandparent
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used
the mailing
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facilty
which is
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so
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time
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comsumeing
and not
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realiable
. They
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have to
wait at
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leat
1 month to
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send
any sort stuff to another country.

Furthermore
, the facility of hospitals with advanced technology and
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well educated
doctors
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make
our
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life
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so
secure and comfort than
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before
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some
year back.
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Now
a day you
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get
emergency facility when are in trouble.
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However
this is not happened when my
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gradmother
was
seriously
injured. She was dead
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because
of lack of emergency facility.
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Now
this not situation in
Did you mean "21st century"?
21 century
.

All things are
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changes
.
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Life
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beacome
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more easier
and
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confort
.
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So
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finalli
I
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conculde
that we are
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noe
safer than our
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grandparents
.
5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
22Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
43Mistakes

IELTS essay agree or disagree Life today is easier and more comfortable than it was when your grandparents were children。 v. 2

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
341 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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