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Agnostids the extinct marine animals

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The reading and the lecture are both about agnostids, a group of extinct marine animals. The author has tree theories how agnostids may have lived. The lecturer has three weaknesses about these theories. According to the reading agnostidy may have been free-swimming predators. The lecturer challenges this argument. Predators have large developed eyes but agnostids had weak eyes even blind. There is no evidence that other sensors could enable them to be predators. Secondly, the author means that they have may lived on the seafloor due to other types of primitive arthropods. The lecturer, however, asserts that seafloor creatures tend to be slow. In case of agnostids this is not so by reason that they are spread in a lot of areas. In consequence, that means that they moved fast from one to another one. For this reason, it is highly unusual that they were seafloor creatures. Finally, the author posits that there is the possibility that the agnostids were parasites. In lecture, the lecture’s stance is that is unlikely. Parasites don’t live in large groups but there is evidence that agnostids were in large groups. A certain amount of parasites can kill the host.
The reading and the lecture are both about
agnostids
, a group of extinct marine animals. The author has tree theories how
agnostids
may have
lived
.
The
lecturer has three weaknesses about these theories.

According to the reading
agnostidy
may have been free-swimming predators. The lecturer challenges this argument. Predators have large developed eyes
but
agnostids
had weak eyes even blind. There is no evidence that other sensors could enable them to be predators.

Secondly
, the author means that they have may
lived
on the seafloor due to other types of primitive arthropods. The lecturer,
however
, asserts that seafloor creatures tend to be slow. In case of
agnostids
this is not
so
by reason that they
are spread
in
a lot of
areas. In consequence, that means that they
moved
fast
from one to another one.
For this reason
, it is
highly
unusual that they were seafloor creatures.

Finally
, the author posits that there is the possibility that the
agnostids
were parasites. In lecture, the lecture’s stance is
that is
unlikely. Parasites don’t
live
in large groups
but
there is evidence that
agnostids
were in large groups. A certain amount of parasites can kill the host.
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IELTS essay Agnostids the extinct marine animals

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  American English
4 paragraphs
195 words
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