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After hustling for months in the finding of my most likely passion.

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After hustling for months in the finding of my most likely passion. Finally, With this letter, I would like to state my candidacy for enrolment in the undergraduate program of game design and development at the Estonian Entrepreneurship University of Applied Sciences for the class of 2024 In July 2020, I graduated from secondary school in India. In high school, I took the Mathematics stream that is a common and go-to option for the confused student, but in the thinking of doing something different I choose computer science as my 5th subject, Which helped me explore new avenues. Even though sometimes it was hard to follow this combination of course, due to a really hard workload, but the interset also helps to push the limit a little more and more.
After hustling for months in the finding of my most likely passion.
Finally
, With this letter, I would like to state my candidacy for
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in the undergraduate program of game design and development at the Estonian Entrepreneurship University of Applied Sciences for the
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of 2024

In July 2020, I graduated from secondary school in India.

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in the thinking of doing something
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I choose computer science as my 5th subject,

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IELTS essay After hustling for months in the finding of my most likely passion.

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
130 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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