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After finding out about an internship vacancy at CADASTRA MARKETING, I was very interested in the opportunity because the company is a reference.

After finding out about an internship vacancy at CADASTRA MARKETING, I was very interested in the opportunity because the company is a reference. ee2nJ
After finding out about an internship vacancy at CADASTRA MARKETING, I was very interested in the opportunity because the company is a reference. Being a communicative person who likes strategies, I am very interested in the area of ​​B&S and a career path in the same area, I have always liked to take the lead in solving problems, whether in my business school or in parallel activities that I do. Among my main qualities I like to highlight planning and organization, flexibility, resilience because I believe that all competent processionals in my area have them too. Please consider me as an option to hire you, you will realize that although I do not experience you working I will be able to be efficient, learn and adapt quickly as I like constant learning and discoveries, for example I learned English by myself and now I am studying German, work at CADASTRA will be a fantastic learning opportunity, I will also add a lot to the company.
After finding out about an internship vacancy at
CADASTRA
MARKETING, I was
very
interested in the opportunity
because
the
company
is a reference. Being a communicative person who likes strategies, I am
very
interested in the area of ​​
B&S
and a career path in the same area, I have always liked to take the lead in solving problems, whether in my business school or in parallel activities that I do. Among my main qualities I like to highlight planning and organization, flexibility, resilience
because
I believe that all competent processionals in my area have them too.

Please
consider me as an option to hire you, you will realize that although I do not experience you working I will be able to be efficient, learn and adapt
quickly
as I like constant learning and discoveries,
for example
I learned English by myself and
now
I am studying German, work at
CADASTRA
will be a fantastic learning opportunity, I will
also
add
a lot to the
company
.
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IELTS essay After finding out about an internship vacancy at CADASTRA MARKETING, I was very interested in the opportunity because the company is a reference.

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
165 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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