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Advertising is good for society.

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Admittedly, advertising is an effective method in raising residents’ awareness of social issues. The first reason is that ubiquitous advertisements would help people to approach new campaigns or policies from the authorities broadly and frequently. Besides, an eclectic mix of advertisements may bring people in for the excitement of newness, which would make them more willing to implement what the policymakers desire. To cite an example, through a song and a dance spreading the message against Covid 19 which went viral on a popular social ad space named TikTok most of the Vietnamese people were aware of the danger of the pandemic and initially took preventive measures. Indeed, this method has had attracted successfully the attention of members of society with exciting responses, which may not be seen in some familiar means of mass communication such as newspapers or news.
Admittedly
, advertising is an effective method in raising residents’ awareness of social issues. The
first
reason is that ubiquitous advertisements would
help
people
to approach new campaigns or policies from the authorities
broadly
and
frequently
.
Besides
, an eclectic mix of advertisements may bring
people
in for the excitement of newness, which would
make
them more willing to implement what the policymakers desire. To cite an example, through a song and a dance spreading the message against
Covid 19
which went viral on a popular social ad space named TikTok most of the Vietnamese
people
were aware of the
danger
of the pandemic and
initially
took preventive measures.
Indeed
, this method has had attracted
successfully
the attention of members of society with exciting responses, which may not be
seen
in
some
familiar means of mass communication such as newspapers or news.
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IELTS essay Advertising is good for society.

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
140 words
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