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Advertising has impact on us.

Advertising has impact on us. oRPbw

I think that advertising is various. For example, bored type, funny type, beautiful type. Conspicuous advertising is parody type. In our world, there are many advertising. If you walk 100m around your neighborhood, you can see at least one advertising. In the case of parody advertising, a lot of people become interested in this one. Also, those make us happy, 　fun and laugh. Impact and unexpectedness are triggers for strong input to the brain. Also, rather than looking directly at the brand name, it is better to associate the brand through colors, designs, and characters to leave a stronger impression on the brand.

I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
 that advertising is various.

For example
, bored type, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:amusinghumorous
funny
 type, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :gorgeousstunning
beautiful
 type.

Conspicuous advertising is parody type.

In our world, there are This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 advertising. If you walk Insert a space between the numerical value and the unit symbol "100 m"100 m
100m
 around your neighborhood, you can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witness
see
 at least one advertising.

In the case of parody advertising, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
a lot of
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 become interested in this one.

Also
, those This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 us happy,Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace 
fun and laugh.

Impact and unexpectedness are triggers for strong input to the brain.

Also
, rather
 than looking directly
 at the brand name, it is better to associate the brand through colors, designs, and characters to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :depart
leave
 a stronger

This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterImpression
impression
 on the brand. 