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Advertisers have big fiction and vision. And sometimes they were criticized. People say they don’t pay attention to advertisement but there is doubt about it. You prefer to look in blank wall in railway station or look at a witty picture about product. Many people like to hear radio advertisement in the morning. On the other hand, people don’t spend much money to buying an advertisement magazine. Products are introduced to people by Ads. But who want to pay to advertisers about Ads? Absolutely, poor old producers; who couldn’t create mass markets for products. Advertisers give big revenue to make good Ads. Not only very good products become advertisement, but also a very cheap or maybe not good things are introduced to people.
Advertisers have
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Products
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who want to pay to advertisers about Ads?
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, poor
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producers; who couldn’t create mass markets for
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products
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make
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Ads. Not
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,
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IELTS essay Advertisers perform a useful service to the community

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
123 words
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text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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