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Advertisements has converted to an important part of TV shows and social media. Discuss advantages and disadvantages and give your opinion.

Advertisements has converted to an important part of TV shows and social media. Discuss advantages and disadvantages and give your opinion. rL5bl
Nowadays, advertisements play an important role of every demo product. this essay will first show that how this can affect in people’s lifestyle and encourage them to buy and use unnecessary goods as a primary disadvantage, followed by this is the best way to supply cost for these programs and shows. The main disadvantage of this phenomenon is influence on people’s life style. When you watch a program on TV or playing a game, suddenly you face with an advertise which it shows you a product. You may don’t need it, but it plays frequently, so this induces you to open it and you will get in tap. It would be definitely waste of time and money for you. One possible advantage is that these company supports financially games, TV programs and many types of shows. They pay cost of producing, actors, singers and other essential equipment for prepare and play them. So, it would be inevitable watching their advertisement. Overall, it is very negative phenomenon for people, because they face by frequently advertisement every day, and even, they try to refuse watching them, eventually they may be tempted and spend their money on something which is useless. In conclusion, the advertisement provide a proper money for programmers as a sponsor although, it can sometimes lead to waste of money and time for audience and spectators, it is a negative way in absorb client.
Nowadays, advertisements play an
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role of every demo product.
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show
that how this can affect in
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people
’s lifestyle and encourage them to
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buy
and
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use
unnecessary
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goods
as a primary disadvantage, followed by this is the best way to supply cost for these programs and
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shows
.

The main disadvantage of this phenomenon is influence on
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people
’s life style. When you
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watch
a program on TV or playing a game,
suddenly
you face with an
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advertise
which it
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shows
you a product. You may don’t need it,
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but
it plays
frequently
,
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so
this induces you to open it and you will
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get
in tap. It would be definitely waste of time and
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money
for you.

One possible advantage is that these
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company
supports
financially
games, TV programs and
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many
types of
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shows
. They pay cost of producing, actors, singers and other essential equipment for prepare and play them.
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So
, it would be inevitable watching their advertisement.

Overall
, it is
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very
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negative
phenomenon for
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people
,
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because
they face by
frequently
advertisement every day, and even, they try to refuse watching them,
eventually
they may
be tempted
and spend their
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money
on something which is useless.

In conclusion
, the advertisement provide a proper
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money
for programmers as a sponsor although, it can
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sometimes
lead to waste of
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money
and time for audience and spectators, it is a
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negative
way in absorb client.
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IELTS essay Advertisements has converted to an important part of TV shows and social media. Discuss advantages and disadvantages and give your opinion.

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